A Moment-

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A rough-and-tumble Moment

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Submitted: March 29, 2013

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Stormbird Throneshaker

A picture perfect piece of writing, with just one itsy bitsy wee wittle problem! I thought that the moon was made out of cheese, ha ha ha! Other than that, this gets a vote/like from me.

Fri, March 29th, 2013 11:38pm

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thanks ... try better next, my dear friend

Mon, December 23rd, 2013 11:05am

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aruntp

excellent poem. i love the frame how you created in imagination. good work.

Mon, April 1st, 2013 7:11am

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thanks aruntp....

Mon, December 23rd, 2013 11:03am

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ashi17

Brilliant piece from your pen, it is truly treat for your readers, good work. Keep writing and amazing your readers....

Wed, April 3rd, 2013 4:37pm

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thanks Ashi.. your comment gives inspiration as always...

Mon, December 23rd, 2013 11:03am

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Basilia

amazing work! I enjoyed reading it.. keep writing :)

Fri, April 5th, 2013 1:43pm

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thanks //Basilia

Sun, December 22nd, 2013 8:10am

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GuiltyPleasure

you have a mind of many turns... this is a compliment :)

Sat, April 20th, 2013 1:54pm

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ok.. nice compliment...

Sun, December 22nd, 2013 8:09am

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Sir Biswajit Saha

Heart touching lines........excellent work done!!!!!!

Wed, May 1st, 2013 5:45am

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thanks..

Sun, December 22nd, 2013 8:08am

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Iason Tonyaka

Beautiful. It draws on in with its simple elegance.

Sun, May 12th, 2013 10:09pm

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thanks.. lason.

Sun, December 22nd, 2013 8:06am

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