Poem by: shaleheen
swing, kite, indulge, rough-and-tumble
Submitted: March 29, 2013
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A picture perfect piece of writing, with just one itsy bitsy wee wittle problem! I thought that the moon was made out of cheese, ha ha ha! Other than that, this gets a vote/like from me.
thanks ... try better next, my dear friend
Great writing, lovely word-painting. Loved it.
excellent poem. i love the frame how you created in imagination. good work.
Brilliant piece from your pen, it is truly treat for your readers, good work. Keep writing and amazing your readers....
thanks Ashi.. your comment gives inspiration as always...
amazing work! I enjoyed reading it.. keep writing :)
you have a mind of many turns... this is a compliment :)
ok.. nice compliment...
Sir Biswajit Saha
Heart touching lines........excellent work done!!!!!!
This was Fantastic!! Very heartfelt and deep stanzas. I enjoyed to read this. great job :)
Beautiful. It draws on in with its simple elegance.
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