Poem by: shaleheen
economy, blanket, whirl, grievous, pinched, whopping
Submitted: February 23, 2013
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This was an incredible poem, very insightful and amazingly written (:
thanks for your realization..........
Great poem, I enjoyed it :)
thanks for appreciation.........
Good job! The miserable plight of the poor has been portrayed very well. The picture is so apt. Was the poem composed for the picture? or the picture chosen for the poem? It suits well. GAVE A LIKE IT VOTE.
beautiful lines. interesting sketch. good work.
I really liked this. The drawing helps imagine it more clearly. The words used really create the picture inside the readers head and I found it an interesting topic to write about. Very well written and flows well. Great job :)
thanks for reading and inspiring me........
The thought this poem is trying to convey is quite the truth of life. I was intrigued by the use of the word 'fence' in the fourth line of the first paragraph. Could you tell me what made you use it?
thanks you.. i will explain it..
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