Poem by: shaleheen
lonely, angel, autumn, dream, wither, perches
Submitted: January 31, 2013
© Copyright 2016 shaleheen. All rights reserved.
Wow! A beautiful poem with an amazingly awesome picture...or is it the other way around? I'll just say both ways and leave it at that and give it a vote as well!
Oh my goodness! I love this poem! And the feel to it was amazing. Beautiful image and words that fit quite well with the other..
thanks my friend........
it is outstanding....really shaleheen u r very very good at writing...a master piece from u...excellent job.
Another beautiful poem, I expected nothing less. The imagery and emotion was strong. I wish I could offer more feedback but I'm not much of an expert on poetry.
lovely poem .. way of expressing was so nice . good job.i like it :) :)
thanks for appreciation.........
Good imagery and wonderful choice of words. ..beautiful poem :)
Beautiful imagery and wonderful choice of background :) Really liked
oh, very special, beautiful and WARMEST DELIGHT!! love this, you certainly made my evening, very memorable indeed!
oh.. great... very inspiring............
Waiting For You
I like both the picture and the poem! Really great job :)
The picture and poem duo was something completely new to me on here! How did you do that? It added so much to the awe this whole poem left me with; this was a truly beautiful piece of work. It left me longing for it to be autumn yet again! Great job. C:
thanks for ur appreciation.........
The picture, the word choice, the flow, the imagery, the poem itself all created a stir of feelings from reading this. I believe this poem broke boundaries if any to really prove how amazing of a writer you are.
very inspiring ..........
Well done. Some context word choice was a little different, but not altogether wrong. It did not stop this from being a well described poem of love and longing.
Would you mind if I posted a link to this poem on my Facebook fan page Krinler Literature ? I would name you the author and show it to my fans there for them to read you here.
Good writing = )
The addition of beautiful picture with the poem multiplies the impact of words. Thanks for the request, amazing work! :)
Awww!!! I loved this poem and that photo is just amazing. Barakallahu fik (I think I wrote it right, if not I meant to say "may God's blessing be upon you!)
this was a really good poem. i love the picture u added to it :) keep up the amazing work
I loved the pic, it really set the mood
I love the picture you used for this poem, bro. It really adds to the imagery you use. It makes me want to go fishing. That's my favorite hobby...it even trumps writing! I may have told you this before, but your writing style is very similar to the transcendentalists, some of my favorite American writers. Good job here, brother.
Thanks for sharing this.
thanks Zabala for your very inspiring comments.........
So beautiful and romantic. Thanks for the invite. Please always do. I also liked the idea of uploading a picture next to your poems.
Thanks for sharing your wonderful poems with us.
I like the dream and how passionate it is. The poem was good, and painted a enchanting image in my mind. Very nice -green
This was a great poem. It was amazing. You have trhe talent.
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