Poem by: shaleheen
passion, song, abstract, crave, melancholy, horizon, bide, vitreous
Submitted: January 06, 2013
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ever yearning to capture an essence of love i see; i'd catagorize you as amongst the foremost romantics on booksie and the only one who chooses love as one of his primary themes of focus that i can actually read and enjoy! good work.
Great poem. You are so good at writing about love.
A natural with poems. I hope to hear about more poems from you
Excellent writing! A great poem.
Shouldn't "Oh! I forever behold thy" be "Oh! I forever behold thee"?
As a small little matter of fact shouldn't all the "thy" be "thee"?
wow! I think your poem had just inspired another short story for me XD if its ok, can i reference a line or 2 from it? (don't worry; you'll get all the credit)
thats so nice , i liked it .... well done :) TC
I think that was truly, immensely a superb effort, I mean, I don't really consider myself a poetry-critique in any way, but for what it's worth, sir, I found your poem just too appealing, and attractive!
And thanks for the request! I'll be glad that you'll be reading my short story! :D
I am touched by this poem and failed to get any words to appreciate such a mature work of your's............ loved it, loved it, loved it !!!
A great poem, full of longing and yearning. Keep me updated!
Beautifully written, I think you've captured the essence of love using incredible vocabulary and I love how the words flow so easily.
I still remember your poem, Beauty Of Rose,' published in the International Literary Magazine Reflection. I liked that poem very much. This poem is also a beauty of English Literature, you are a good poet. Thanks for the reading invitation.
this is truly beautiful Shaleheen!! you expressed your untold love that is quite reflection of a classic love.
its a beautiful love poem which is rarely written....
Hey there :) I saw your reading request and decided to read it right away. It's great:) Brilliant choice of words :) It was very well written. I love it! The title's great too! Good job :)
Wonderful poem with excellent wording and style! Good job thanks for sharing Shaleheen:)
You have a way of finding the right ingrdients to making love manifest in your poetry. A simply palatable poem addressed directly to one's heart. Loved it.
Another great poem by you!
Elegant and thoughtful, any lover would be obliged to receive such liquid love. Yours truly, Glinda Gail
jiji chocolate sweet
a great poem again!! it was beautifully written I really really loved it!! so romantic two and full of emotions!! real great job!!
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