Poem by: shaleheen
gay, dumb, pour, pop, glee, chord, pensive, psyche, kinky, quaking, fathomless
Submitted: November 29, 2012
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Tough to follow, yet I like the idea.
thanks Saywhat... for your comment..
IMAD UL ISLAM
Very tough wording!! I caught something of it. Nice one. Regards:]
thanks IMAD for your appreciation...
Eileen Kathleen Mcbriar
A very well penned poem if i might say so full of creative and rather complex wording which only the mighty intellects might fathom.
thanks.. i try to simple next time...
Your large vocabulary is wonderful! It makes the reader reread your poems to understand the meaning.
thanks lauricula for your realization..
A rose is equivalent to a beauitful, complicated love. Thats what i got out of it, beautifully done. -green
thanks GREEN for your appreciation,,,
Intense vocabulary which only inspires me to learn more and expand my own. Either way I see the message you are conveying in your piece well done.-banks
thanks SGBank for your comment..
Wow, REALLY rich vocabulary! Thats only one of the numerous reasons why i love your poems! :) this was a very nice and quick poem and sounded lovely. As SGBanks said, it also made me to expand my own vocabulary! Thank heavens for dictionaries! Well done yet again!
thanks.. you are so inspiring... i will write a better poem for you...
I rather enjoyed read this, very good.
thank you for enjoying...
Very well written. Great job with descriptions and keep using them :)
-thanks.. nice appreciation..
There is love and passion and a cleverly phrased comparison. It's complicated but its deep and beautiful when you read it through. Good job:)
thanks for your comments and realization....
you are a really awesome writer. I really like this! Brilliant. There is just a lot of effort and value in this poem. Nice work. :)
thanks for your realization Lady Black...
Creative wording on this poem; good job and thanks for sharing:)
thanks for the compliments.........
A bit obscure, but I feel like I got a sense of what was being communicated on a deeper level. However, it was very rich with emotion.
thanks for your critique..
You have an interesting style of writing and a good choice of vocabulary. I enjoyed reading this poem.
thanks for your critique which inspired me...
I like how this made me re-read it again, you've got a large vocabulary which is good as said it makes the reader read it again to grasp the meaning behind the words. I can't say much else that probably hasn't already been said other than it's a good read and that it was very well written. Keep writing~
ps. Gave it a like vote.
its an inspiration for me .. i will write more .. thanks
Succinct and cryptic, I particularly liked your closing line.
thank you ... thank you.. i also liked that line...
Great poem wonderful vocab.
Thank.. you.. Seffire..
I enjoyed the intense and great vocab but I would like more... inbetween words that actually connect the larger words you use other wise I find it too hard too follow.
thanks Michael for your great realization..
wow .. so many big words .... but I loved it ... poetry should compel the reader to go ahead of the words and understand the true meaning of the poetry ... and that is what happened with me ... lovely poem :)
thanks Miss A for your comments...
Touching & thought provoking work !!
thank you ..Ashi..
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