end of darkness

a little lost with the message, but i like that you played with words. always great toys.

I agree that the words were well played! great job fellow friend :) Keep writing

it is really beautiful. what a beautiful wording and depth. Absoulately higher class poetry. i really liked it.

I admired the use of wording in this poem, it was also very well structured. I really enjoyed it.

Absoulately mind blowing. i am inspired through your wording. Really its the worth of my time.
thanks
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It certainly was jocund. Your poem reminds me of the old beatnik poetry of the 1950's here in america. A bit obscure, but colorful and meaningful.

Very creative wording! Also, this was a very uplifting poem, end of darkness. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing, Shaleheen:)

I enjoyed it too.
Keep up the excellent work and thanks for recommending it to me.

Love Da KinG

I like your word choices. It's a great poem. Thanks for inviting me here. :)

Hi Shaleheen, thank you for informing me about your poem. Nice use of imagery. Though, sometimes when we try to be 'over poetic' we tend to lose the emotions as we write it. The words are there but the emotions cannot be felt. Try the 'less is more' some other time.
It's still your poem, though, 'twas just my opinion. Keep writing and keep me updated if you have new one.

Kisses,
T

Hello Shaheleen ..
Thank you for giving me the oppurtunity to review your poem.
You have used wonderful words to express your thoughts in this poem. It was a bit difficult for me to comprehend but nevertheless , the message that you wanted to convey through this poem reached me and I am happy with what you have offered here.
You write extremely well.
Good Job :)

That was,DEEP! Really magnificent!

Beautiful , you touched the standard of classic poetry, very well written, keep writting :))

I was lost, in fact still am, but I think that is what makes it appealing... gets you thinking, you know
I especially liked "dark defuses and alchemize"

great one dear...nice word combination and nice flowing..this is a great piece of writing...

Liked it. Words remind me of me. =)

A beautiful poem. I can feel the love in this poem, and your words are wonderful. Great job

Very deep poem. Puts you into a deep imagination and thought. I love it. Great work!

It's very descriptive and it flows well. I like it! Keep writing, I'll be reading. :)

This is really good. Well done.