Poem by: shaleheen
love, dark, twilight, soul, glimmer, triumph, grin, milky, glee, cackling, caliginous, illumine, jocund, perches
Submitted: October 15, 2012
© Copyright 2016 shaleheen. All rights reserved.
a little lost with the message, but i like that you played with words. always great toys.
Thanks you for your appreciation.
I agree that the words were well played! great job fellow friend :) Keep writing
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it is really beautiful. what a beautiful wording and depth. Absoulately higher class poetry. i really liked it.
thnks dear for your beautiful feeling.
I admired the use of wording in this poem, it was also very well structured. I really enjoyed it.
thank you very much for your nice appreciation.
Absoulately mind blowing. i am inspired through your wording. Really its the worth of my time.
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It certainly was jocund. Your poem reminds me of the old beatnik poetry of the 1950's here in america. A bit obscure, but colorful and meaningful.
oh!yes , i really liked your comment. beatnik poetry, what a great comment.
you are there so i am here.
Very creative wording! Also, this was a very uplifting poem, end of darkness. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing, Shaleheen:)
Thank you Joelat for your review and appreciation.
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I enjoyed it too.
Keep up the excellent work and thanks for recommending it to me.
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i am trying to keep.
I like your word choices. It's a great poem. Thanks for inviting me here. :)
Thanks for your beautiful comment. i appreciate it.
Hi Shaleheen, thank you for informing me about your poem. Nice use of imagery. Though, sometimes when we try to be 'over poetic' we tend to lose the emotions as we write it. The words are there but the emotions cannot be felt. Try the 'less is more' some other time.
It's still your poem, though, 'twas just my opinion. Keep writing and keep me updated if you have new one.
So talented coment. Love you..
Hello Shaheleen ..
Thank you for giving me the oppurtunity to review your poem.
You have used wonderful words to express your thoughts in this poem. It was a bit difficult for me to comprehend but nevertheless , the message that you wanted to convey through this poem reached me and I am happy with what you have offered here.
You write extremely well.
Good Job :)
Thanks "Miss A" for reading my poem so heartly, i appreciate your comment that inspired me.
That was,DEEP! Really magnificent!
Yes it is. I liked your comment.
Beautiful , you touched the standard of classic poetry, very well written, keep writting :))
Thank you for your awesome comment. i am trying to write a bet
ter poetry. i am inspired by your comment.
I was lost, in fact still am, but I think that is what makes it appealing... gets you thinking, you know
I especially liked "dark defuses and alchemize"
why lost? your comment is so emotional. Thanks for like that particular line. its also my favorite line.
Thank you so much
great one dear...nice word combination and nice flowing..this is a great piece of writing...
Thanks you for read my poem and the beautiful comment.
Liked it. Words remind me of me. =)
Thank you for liking it and i also like "me of me"
A beautiful poem. I can feel the love in this poem, and your words are wonderful. Great job
Thanks, i like your comment.
Very deep poem. Puts you into a deep imagination and thought. I love it. Great work!
Thanks for your comments.
It's very descriptive and it flows well. I like it! Keep writing, I'll be reading. :)
Thank you for appreciation.
This is really good. Well done.
Thanks for your appreciation.
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