Poem by: shaleheen
love, rain, memory, decay, glisten
Submitted: September 21, 2012
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what a nice poem. its tremendously reflects of love. So talented. Really it twisted time,love and nature.
Thanks to write such a beautiful poem.
thanks again for ur awesome comment.
ohh nice! very well written, love
i am so glad that great poet like you comment my poetry. it inspired me. I try better near future.
Thanks a lot.
Short, but sweet. Good job.
thanks for sweet comment. thanks.
This is really good. It encompasses so much in such a little poem. Loved it.
Thank you for realizing my poem. you are so talented and strong in writting.
thanks again for such a beautiful comment.
Its short but even in it's shortness it had lots of emotion within it. Well written.
Really i like your comment.Thank you for realizing my feeling and such a beautiful comment.
I am in love with your wording! I've been searching for someone on Booksie with this writing style.
Is it true? I cant belived it. Thank you for enjoying my poem and comment it so nicely.
i will dedicate you my best poem when i will write it.
Short and sweet, well done! :)
thanks for your comment. i tried to burn emotion shortly here because there was a hurry.
Wonderful poem! I love it! It was definatly worth my time. ~ZAC XD
i really happy that you liked it because i like your poem also. you are so talented.
This was a warm little poem and had a sweetness about it. I like short poems but I also would have liked a little more to your poem because I didn't want it to end so abruptly :D
oh!! really you commented nicely. Next time i should not do that. I think you really enjoy it.
thnaks for your heartful comment.
yes. It does. Good point. I will never be healed. Hope you can be. It happens they say. People just don't usually put people in my special case in consideration when they say that amnesia leaves in your thirties. I'm 34 and still with it. when it leaves you can you tell me how old you are when it does? In case they are including me.....
you are great even you feel that. you are a amazing and so humorous as your poem. you have a freedom to chose any word for any body.
i am so glad that you read my poem and write a few word with your natural style which inspired me a lot also help me write better poem at near future.
Thanks a lot,,,D
hmm its awesommm dude ,,
thanks for ur brilliant comment.
Very sweet poem. Short and sweet! Excellent poetry
thanks for your read my poem and sharing your view.
Nice words - very emotive and dramatic. well done!
you have a great eye and mind.
I like this...powerful use of your words... is it cheesy that this would be awesome on a poster with a abstract nature theme background...
i tried always to use powerful word because it powered you and me also. I liked ur imagination and talency for last few words.
you wrote a beautiful poem which reflects multidimensional sense like nature, nostalgia, rhythm and love. Short but so sweet to read.
I also loke your writing style and word chosing.
i acknowledge ur appreciate. Thanks for a great realization.
i liked your comment.(,,,D,,,)
impressive and a great little poem..Loved it!!!
i like ur comments. Thanks...
Nicely constructed of art!
i am really appreciate of your comments.
This is a really nice poem.
Thank you very much to read my poem and your appreciation.
that was awesome. I like how you used the decaying part in the poem as if memories are going blank. Super klever. Well done :). Another poem you might like of mine is to keep fighting .
thanks for ur comment.
Another poem "you might like of mine is keep fighting"
may be or may be not.
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