Poem by: Shane P
trees, nature, haiku
Submitted: February 08, 2013
They start as a seed,
They home birds, Giraffes they feed,
They give life to earth.
© Copyright 2016 Shane P. All rights reserved.
Very nice observation in a marvellous form, closely fitting the original Japanese idea that a haiku should contain a reflection on nature. You've got a talent for it.
Cheers, i really enjoy writing them once done right they're nice to read and write
Bert's right in his comment about haiku relecting nature originally, and this one is super. What it does, which is great considering you've only used 17 syllables, is create a wonderful image in my mind of the beauty of trees, and how important they are. Clever piece again. Write one about ferrets.
Thats random but ok i'll give it a go haha
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