Poem by: Shannan Browne
tears, heart, light, rainbow
Submitted: March 14, 2013
The light of your heart
Creates a perfect rainbow
Through your quiet tears
© Copyright 2016 Shannan Browne. All rights reserved.
Wow, This was really good.
I find it a hard task to write a haiku, as your word choice has to be exact and straight to the point, because the structure is so precise. (not making any sense..)
However, you have a knack of writing haikus and you have structures this very well. Your Imagery was perfect and the way you write (the flow and rythm) is exceotional. Great job :D :D
Wow, indeed! Thank-you so much Kitty, that is so kind and encouraging of you to say. Very much appreciated :-) Keep well. $
B Garth Steinhagen
Very, very good...this is emotion...so simple. Check out my poem "Someting" by B. Garth Steinhagen
Indeed, it was a tearful moment indeed. Thank-you so much for commenting. Keep well $
Thank-you, much appreciated $
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