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Poem by: Shannan Browne

Genre: Literary Fiction

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Poem by: Shannan Browne

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Genre: Literary Fiction

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Summary

Why do people persevere on some things, no matter what?

Summary

Why do people persevere on some things, no matter what?

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Submitted: October 06, 2012

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Submitted: October 06, 2012

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Date number three

 

Dude, I don’t understand

After two we were through

Your persistence was supposed to stop

You were supposed to get the plot

 

Don’t you understand?

Your efforts are a waste

You should put your awesomeness

Into another chase

 

Find a girl who feels like you

Find a woman who likes you

You really are sweet

But you are wasting all these treats on me

 

You have excelled again

As with nothing else to do

I accepted your billionth offer

To spend some time with you

 

That restaurant for lunch was grand

And then you took me to the sand

That beach was amazing

And the horse ride inspiring

 

Did you time that sunset

To be beyond the realm of dreams?

Then the walk back under perfect stars

With the incredibly clear brightness of Mars

 

Did you know about that impromptu group?

Who set up the promenade dance floor?

Did you plan that we would win

As we danced under the moon?

 

Lying on the bonnet of your car

Seeing that shooting star…

I wished you could find a woman

Who will love you for all you are

 

 


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