I see by Shaquille H

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a girl who is in pain and me wanting to help her make the pain go away


I look into her eyes and all i see

is the pain she's trying to bear inside

she has seen to much rain

i'm ready to bring the sun out

Her heart is broken

guess i'm the repair man

maybe i'll be the one to repair it

with my gentle hands

and my gentle voice

if she lets me

hopefully the past won't be brought up

like she's looking over a photo album

wishing my actions will not resemble

the man in the picture

while i'm wishing my name is worth mentioning

while a comet is flying by

after connecting the stars

all i see is her face in my sky

Perfect on the inside

Perfect on the outside

like a cake made by god

her type is rare to see

she doesn't resemble anybody else

even if it's halloween

Submitted: November 05, 2011

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x epicfail x

Oh wow. when i read that i felt emotional it was great i have to say best I've read to day!!!! Love it!!

Sat, November 5th, 2011 9:59pm

Shaquille H

Thank you :)

Sat, November 5th, 2011 10:15pm

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