Ones I Love, poem by SharingFeelings

Ones I Love

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Poem by: SharingFeelings

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Status: Finished | Genre: Romance | House: Booksie Classic

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I write this to someone i like....

Submitted: August 26, 2012

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Submitted: August 26, 2012

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To: Ones i love so much

You never know my love towards you

For its too hard to bear

This is good or bad?

Who shall i share my feelings towards you?

I think none will do.

For it is too risky

Everything will changed went the hidden is revealed

Don't care good or bad

No courage to peep

For i know is it wrong

The wrongest decision i made.

To fall for you.

People learn from mistake

But why didn't i?

I'm full of cuts but can't find the strength to stop

When will i wake?

For i need is time

To rest my endless heartbeats for you

One day i will laugh at my stupidness

With a scar left by you

From: The one that hurt deeply.

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Blackdragon99

Comment | 32 words

Sun, August 26th, 2012 2:46am

Hey thi is amazing. Only fault is the I and in I am isn't cap. All aside incredible. I loved it, had to click like.
Tell me when you post more stuff :)

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Comment | 14 words

Sun, August 26th, 2012 4:57am

Thank you for the advice. I really appreciate it. Try my best next time : )

Ienzo Darkness

Comment | 32 words

Sun, August 26th, 2012 3:56am

Look this is amazing and full of in depth emotion and truth. A few spelling and grammar mistakes,but other than that,it was all good. Tell me when you post more :)

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Sun, August 26th, 2012 4:55am

Thanks you. I will try my best next time : )