I'd like to go to a place where it alway's stay quiet.
no screaming,or crying.

I'd like to go to a place where no one has ever known.

In a state of mine where I could always call my own.

Where I can go anytime I choose and theres no such thing as time.

Where I can feel no pain.

And to hear the rain on my window pane.

Just calm and say what a beautiful place for me to find.

But you keep watching my every move.

And keep on track with everything I say.

Why won't you let me be.

But I asked myself, Why am I even here.

I wonder,you leave me wondering and thinking.

Why I don't know.

Now I keep having those tears in my eyes.

Have my arms around my knees.

But I didn't need to feel this way.

When I walked into that door.

Everyday is crying,screaming,slamming and lying.

But for now,I can't even remember

Who I am or who I was before.

Submitted: September 03, 2008

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I really liked your poem.
I too would love to find that quiet place.
One day,in a twinkle of an eye,we will.
God Bless you in your writing, Shattered.
Your Friend,

Fri, October 3rd, 2008 11:59am


thank you so very much.for enjoyed reading it

Fri, October 3rd, 2008 11:03am

Beautiful Simplicity

Wow that was a powerful piece. In a way, I can definitely relate. You pretty much just described one of my most difficult relationships.

You really expressed yourself beautifully. :)

Thu, October 23rd, 2008 8:10pm



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