Its hard for me to trust you.
you making it very hard for me to love you.
It's not my fault that you're afraid to love again.
I can't stay around looking all desperate for your love in return.
I'm sorry again but I ain't your sis-ta.
You know I tried my very best just to please ya.
Times this days went by too fast.
So I don't think this love will last.
Maybe we weren't meant to be.
In public you afraid to hold my hand.
You tried to ignore me whenever you see your friends.
I'm the one that is still holding onto you.
I'm the one that making myself look like a fool.
Now it's time for us to say our bye-byes.
Sooner or Later you'll realize.
What you've been missed.
Submitted: April 06, 2009
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Very straight to the point type of writting.. I liked it!
Well Done my friend!
Angellynn :)
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THANK YOU SO MUCH ANGIE.GOD BLESS YOU.
THANK YOU FOR THE ENCOURAGEMENT,
You got right to meat of the thing. You really captured the moments that stand out. Great work.
Wed, April 8th, 2009 3:51pm
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THANK YOU VERY MUCH.FOR SUPPORT MY WORK.
THANKS FOR BEING A GOOD FRIEND.GOD BLESS.
This poem hits home with me. I have been there also. It was beautifully written and I felt the emotion coming off the screen. Great job.
Tue, April 21st, 2009 9:15pm
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thank you so very much.mostly thats the reason i write it.'cause i know some people who have there and done that.god bless.thanks again.
Tue, April 21st, 2009 4:37pm
WOW! Its very nicely written...When the person we love can't reciprocate its better to let go of them...
Tue, May 5th, 2009 5:01am
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thanks for the comment.
Wed, May 6th, 2009 12:32pmFacebook Comments
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Wow! someone is sure hurting. I like this, it has a somewhat straight to the point feel to it. as with poetry and other forms of creative writing, your heart is in this piece I bet. Now you've caught my fancy. I sure will check out your stuff.
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thank you so very much.God bless
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