shattered Inside

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the pain

Broken Inside

I'm broken inside

Yet,you don't seem to recognize.

Your voice crushed like thunder.

Your attitudes and actions leave me in wonder.

With all these depression in my mind.

Got me feeling anxious and blind.

Yet,you think it's ok I'm doing just fine.

I can't help but feel that I was the one to blame.

'Cause everyday turns out to be the same.

All I want was everything to be exact like my name (Love).

I'd give up anything just to be normal.

But it's really hard to tell a single soul.

How you erupted me from the inside out like a volcano.

These suffocating thoughts tortured my brain day and night.

Pray God,one day evrything will be alright.


Submitted: August 30, 2008

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Sat, August 30th, 2008 4:01pm

xxstuckinfantesyxx

This is a very touching poem , great job on it . :)

Sat, August 30th, 2008 4:20pm

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Thank you so much
for the support
that really help alot
thank you again.

Sat, August 30th, 2008 10:02am

Kisha Telford

Very well writin. I like it.^_^
although, the rhyming got a liiiiittle boring..but iys not horrible.

~K.T.

Mon, September 1st, 2008 10:08pm

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thanks

Tue, September 2nd, 2008 9:37am

ConcreteAngel

this was the best I read of yours so far. I liked your phrases in this one..hard to choose a fave line or two. excellent job!

Sat, September 27th, 2008 3:26pm

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thank you for ur support.

Tue, September 30th, 2008 4:35am

shaina

good work well done

Wed, October 1st, 2008 7:08am

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thanks for ur support

Wed, October 1st, 2008 3:03am

abby parish

I can realate to this.

Thu, October 23rd, 2008 5:08pm

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thanks

Fri, October 24th, 2008 10:16am

Midnight Rose

Very beautiful and touching!

Fri, January 23rd, 2009 12:44pm

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thank you.for such a wonderful comment.

Fri, February 27th, 2009 6:00pm

Tomoe Zala

Wow! The feelings that were invoked in me when I read this. Absolutely amazing.

Wed, April 8th, 2009 3:52pm

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I'M GLAD YOU WERE INTO IT.THANK YOU.

Thu, April 9th, 2009 3:28am

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