Broken Inside
I'm broken inside
Yet,you don't seem to recognize.
Your voice crushed like thunder.
Your attitudes and actions leave me in wonder.
With all these depression in my mind.
Got me feeling anxious and blind.
Yet,you think it's ok I'm doing just fine.
I can't help but feel that I was the one to blame.
'Cause everyday turns out to be the same.
All I want was everything to be exact like my name (Love).
I'd give up anything just to be normal.
But it's really hard to tell a single soul.
How you erupted me from the inside out like a volcano.
These suffocating thoughts tortured my brain day and night.
Pray God,one day evrything will be alright.
Submitted: August 30, 2008
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This is a very touching poem , great job on it . :)
Sat, August 30th, 2008 4:20pm
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Thank you so much
for the support
that really help alot
thank you again.
Very well writin. I like it.^_^
although, the rhyming got a liiiiittle boring..but iys not horrible.
~K.T.
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thanks
Tue, September 2nd, 2008 9:37am
this was the best I read of yours so far. I liked your phrases in this one..hard to choose a fave line or two. excellent job!
Sat, September 27th, 2008 3:26pm
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thank you for ur support.
Tue, September 30th, 2008 4:35am
good work well done
Wed, October 1st, 2008 7:08am
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thanks for ur support
Wed, October 1st, 2008 3:03am
I can realate to this.
Thu, October 23rd, 2008 5:08pm
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thanks
Fri, October 24th, 2008 10:16am
Very beautiful and touching!
Fri, January 23rd, 2009 12:44pm
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thank you.for such a wonderful comment.
Fri, February 27th, 2009 6:00pm
Wow! The feelings that were invoked in me when I read this. Absolutely amazing.
Wed, April 8th, 2009 3:52pm
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I'M GLAD YOU WERE INTO IT.THANK YOU.
Thu, April 9th, 2009 3:28amFacebook Comments
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