I can see it, love I can see a great sencerity to it, I can see the passion, Of a thousand lovers, In one gentle kiss. I can see the romance, Of a thousand moonlit picnics, In one soft touch. So love I feel the power, I feel it tugging at me, At the core of my excistance, At the core of me. Although I can see love, I can no longer feel it, My love, my world, has caved. My very being has been reduced, To nothingness. I cry a flood of tears, Into my pillow each night, I miss you, my heart no more content, I miss your warmth, And I visit you each day, I lie in the dirt over your grave, Just to feel closer to you, I am not here any more, My soul extinguished along with your life. I lost you to a drunk, I lost myself to a drunk. I place a lily over your grave each day, To symbolise our love, I feel lost and lonely, But I know you are gone, Although it pains me to say it. I miss you, my love, And although we were only young, I felt that together we would stand, And our love was iravocable, As we were intertwined. But you were taken from me, And nothing will dim your memory, Even though you have left me, I am no longer part of humanity!
Submitted: April 09, 2012
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That was an emotional poem! Well written. Few spelling errors are there. Check out.
I like it.
Take care :)
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Thankyou arun:) I am not the best speller:') xxxxxxxxxx
Tue, April 10th, 2012 3:19pm
Very nicely done. Emotional and heartfelt.
Tue, April 10th, 2012 10:01pm
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Thankyou:D xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Tue, April 10th, 2012 3:20pm
I really enjoyed this poem. Amazingly emotional and just an excellent poem :)
Sun, April 15th, 2012 8:25am
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Aww, thankyou so so so much, :D thankyou for takin the time to read and reply to my poem, much love, Shazza xxxxxxxxxxxx
Mon, April 16th, 2012 1:18am
Interesting but a bit too disorganized. Nice work though.
Sat, April 28th, 2012 3:08am
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Thankyou:)
Sat, April 28th, 2012 3:07am
I liked it! great job ~Kaety
Sat, April 28th, 2012 2:37pm
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Aw thankyou so so so much!
Sat, April 28th, 2012 12:32pm
This is indeed touching and emotional. Though it is not in real poetry format, I like it.
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Thanks
Wed, June 13th, 2012 1:23pm
Very touching and extremely well written. Bravo!
Fri, September 28th, 2012 6:02pm
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Thank you so much:) xxxxx
Fri, September 28th, 2012 11:34amFacebook Comments
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gave me shivers. really good. :)
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Aw, thankyou so so much!! Xxxxxxxxxxx
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