Walking through a forest, fingers touching trees,
Iwatch them sway as they dance in the breeze,
crisp golden leaves are leaping about me,
a blanket of fall as far asI can see.
I stand very still, and animals start to appear,
They act so normal, though my presence is near.
Beautiful white, theymice start to play,
and dainty black rabbits, theyhop away.
I look up at the sky and the sun starts to beam,
nature is smiling or so it would seem.
Submitted: July 01, 2011
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This is really nice!!I love it xoxoxo
Sun, July 10th, 2011 6:26pmFacebook Comments
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SarahM15
This is so good, i'm actualy suprised it hasn't got more likes or comments, I love the way you use personification in this poem, great work can't wait to read more :) xx
Sun, July 3rd, 2011 2:28pmAuthor
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Thankyouu, i wrote this last year and thanks sarah, it means a lot, i am happy that you are reading my poems and commenting on them, it means the world to me!?
Sun, July 3rd, 2011 7:35am