Smiling nature

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poem i wrote last year in the autumn time of the year, the image it is shows -to me- brings a inner peace that courses through my vains, enjoy!?

Walking through a forest, fingers touching trees,
Iwatch them sway as they dance in the breeze,
crisp golden leaves are leaping about me,
a blanket of fall as far asI can see.
I stand very still, and animals start to appear,
They act so normal, though my presence is near.
Beautiful white, theymice start to play,
and dainty black rabbits, theyhop away.
I look up at the sky and the sun starts to beam,
nature is smiling or so it would seem.

Submitted: July 01, 2011

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This is so good, i'm actualy suprised it hasn't got more likes or comments, I love the way you use personification in this poem, great work can't wait to read more :) xx

Sun, July 3rd, 2011 2:28pm


Thankyouu, i wrote this last year and thanks sarah, it means a lot, i am happy that you are reading my poems and commenting on them, it means the world to me!?

Sun, July 3rd, 2011 7:35am


This is really nice!!I love it xoxoxo

Sun, July 10th, 2011 6:26pm


Thankyou so much!:)?

Sun, July 10th, 2011 12:24pm

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