Spirtual protection

Poem by: Shazza

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I like to consider that this is what my grandad (R.I.P) and my friend(R.I.P) are doing for me, i hope you like it!?

I am right here,
but you can not see me,
I am in front of you,
but you can not reach out to me,
I am beside you,
but my presence you cannot feel,
I am above you,
but yet the sun passes through me,
I am under you,
but yet your feet cannot hurt me,
I am everywhere around you,
but you cannot detect me,
I am shouting you,
but you cannot hear me,
I am dead,
but, i am a ghost and i am your protector.

Submitted: July 03, 2011

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glitter snow426

oh wow, so down to earth, natural and very clear to see!! GREAT WORK, SO AMAZING!!

Sun, July 3rd, 2011 2:14pm

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Thankyou, i really apriciate this comment, this one means alot to me as you can see by the summary, i lets me hope in what i want and believe in the unknown. Thankyou.. again ;)?

Sun, July 3rd, 2011 7:17am

whiteroses

OOOO sinister!!!
I like!! notice how I pushed the like buttoN!!! xoxoxo

Mon, July 4th, 2011 4:00pm

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Awww, thankyouu, means a lot!?

Mon, July 4th, 2011 11:00pm

arun

Should I have to be honest?
If yes, let me say that this writ lacks the beauty your other works is laden with. It's a bit less compared to others. But overall this too is a nice writ.

I think my brain doesn't agree with the ghost concept. Keep writing. Cheers.

Fri, July 8th, 2011 2:41am

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Haha, thats fine, people are different in which poems they like. I tried something other than love related and i hope it worked. I understand that this one can make people wonder but i think this one means alot to me because i am hoping that this is what my grandad is doing for me and also one of my best friends!! i will keep writing :)?

Thu, July 7th, 2011 11:26pm