What it was like in my life!

You know that feeling you get,
for the very first time,
when THEY walk past i mean,
the one that makes your stomich feel funny,
and you heart beat irrationally,
your arms and legs feel weak,
you throat strangled over some unspoken word,
adrenaline coursing you vains,
you mouth begining to dry out,
your eyelashes uncontrolablly flutter,
your cheeks burning a briliant scarlet,
hyperventilation starts to kick in,
butterflies trying to escape your body,
your spine tingeling repeatedly.
Yes, well, that is the feeling of love!

Submitted: July 03, 2011

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This is really great!
You believe in love in 1st sight!!
I dont really... but I believe that love blossoms out of friendship :P
Keep writing..

Mon, July 4th, 2011 3:58pm


Haha, i believe both to be honest, i have seen someone and liked them loads straight away but i have also had love from a friendship, all the same my last one was love at first sight, thankyouu for the comment, from the bottom of my heart i am so happy that you have commented! i will!?

Mon, July 4th, 2011 10:59pm

Frank Ramtahal

A very vivid description of love beautifully narrated.

A few corrections: "I" is allways in upper case. stomach, and your heart, your throat, your veins, your mouth.

I would be delighted to have you as a fan.

Wed, July 13th, 2011 4:40pm


Thankyouu. i most defianatly will!!?

Wed, July 13th, 2011 9:58am


This poem is written with a fabulous composition. I really like how you put it; all those tiny actions combining together form that enigmatic feeling called love. "I Love It" but I have to click on the "I Like It" button :(

Sat, September 3rd, 2011 3:05pm


Hahahah, aww thgey should put an i LOVE it button on ;') lol, thankyou again for another comment that has made me smile :D!?

Sat, September 3rd, 2011 8:09am

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