There are many people out there

Poem by: Shazza

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With this poem i have tried to capture the differance's in the world, humanity's weaknesses and how we togther can unite as one!

There are many people out there,
oh so many beautiful people,
their kindness and generosity,
radiating peace from them.
They are sunshine on a cloudy day,
they are the hope within desperation,
their lips soft like the inside of a rose,
with which they whisper gods good words.

There are many people out there,
oh so many tortured people
their spitefulness and hate
radiating evil from them.
They are the clouds on a sunny day,
they are desperation within hope,
their lips hard like solid stones,
with which they whisper devils evil words.

There are so many people out there,
oh so many evil and good people,
their opposition creating weakness,
that weakness felt on earth, on us,
the pressure for acceptence,
both evil and good thrust at us,
the angels and the demons trying to claim us,
but we as humanity can rise above,
We can unite andwecan promote peace!

Submitted: July 01, 2011

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glitter snow426

oh so cleverly done!! love this bright wonderful message of peace and togetherness. GREAT STUFF!!

Mon, July 4th, 2011 2:17am

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Thankyou, i love the idea of a united world, so thankyou very much! really thankyou for commenting, means a lot:)?

Sun, July 3rd, 2011 11:00pm

arun

Ok now you made me feel bad that I've not read you before. I feel bad that I missed how talented a creator here in booksie. Yes, I withdraw my words. This is your best of the best work. I freaking love it...

The message is heartfelt. It's open-minded. It is more of an eye-opener. Oh gosh, I will start babbling about this piece if you let me free. But let me stop. In a word - PERFECT.

You made me freeze...:) Keep writing and Kmu...
Your friend/fan, Arun...:)

Fri, July 8th, 2011 2:45am

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AHHHH :D THANKYOU... again ;) arun, you give me soo much hope in my writing, thankss:) i like this one too, haha i steped out of my chaotic life to see the world around me, i recognised sooo much conflict that i wrote a poem to help premote peace, i'm soo glad you liked/loved? it :) PERFECT WOW!!:') Don't feel bad that you have not read my work before this, everybody is busy, especially on here! i will keep you updated, and i'll keep writing...... Your friend shazza:)?

Thu, July 7th, 2011 11:29pm

Serenade Willie

it was amazing! i tried writing poems but they all ended up in a soup.
well... it was like facing reality. totally absorbed by this piece of poetry basted with HUMANITY...
keep up the good work.

Sun, July 10th, 2011 12:52pm

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Thankyou, it means so much that you have taken the time to comment.. i will keep it up, thanks!?

Sun, July 10th, 2011 12:10pm

whiteroses

Really good!!
I like hun!!!
Please remember to read my work!! xoxoxo

Sun, July 10th, 2011 6:25pm

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Really? haha thankyou, i will read your work :D!!?

Sun, July 10th, 2011 12:21pm

papermask

I like the meaning behind this - very nice. I would work on spacing and punctuation, but other that that, you have some solid ideas. :)

Sat, September 3rd, 2011 2:27pm

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Thankyou papermask, i've never been so good at punctuation haha:') but i will look at it thanks for taking the time to comment on my works:) much love, shazza!?????

Sat, September 3rd, 2011 7:34am