With this poem i have tried to capture a moment within a lovers scene, i hope you enjoy it!?

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Your sweet honeysuckle breath,?

?the wind from such caressing my neck,?
?your words whipspered in my ear,?
?warms up the cockles of my heart,?
?your fingers tracing my arm's contours,?
?my body left tingling with your touch,?
?your body heat radites from you,?
?my soul elated by your presence,?

?your eyes piercing through my stare,?
?your smile lifting my own mouth corners,?
?your skin so beautiful, my eyes hurt to look,?
?you heartbeats perfect and undisturbed.?
?You are my first true love, my soul mate, my darling.?
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Submitted: July 01, 2011

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This is so sweet :) I'm gussing it's from an own experiance? xx

Sun, July 3rd, 2011 2:31pm


Haha, maybe, i have just put up a new love poem which was also how i felt with my first love:) thankyou, i guess i felt rather sweet at the time:')?

Sun, July 3rd, 2011 7:36am

Poet Sex God

Omg I absolutely love this poem it is amazing. :) It reminds me so much of my true love. :)

Tue, July 5th, 2011 6:59pm


Thankyou, i'm glad you liked it. I am happy that i have reminded you of your happy memories and that it links in with your life:)?

Tue, July 5th, 2011 12:17pm


Omg, it's so cute. In addition, the hearts attract the reader more. I'm lured to this. Ha ha.
Keep writing and Kmu...

Fri, July 8th, 2011 2:47am


Ino i ?LOVE? the hearts ;) and thats what i was trying to doo haha... thanks arun, means the world and back... I will: keep you updated, keep writing! much love?

Thu, July 7th, 2011 11:31pm


Sooo sweet!! xoxox

Sun, July 10th, 2011 6:26pm


Thankyou whiteroses means a lot to hear this?

Sun, July 10th, 2011 12:22pm

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