Blessed.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

a sonnet, it's quite cutesie actually, originally for school work, but i like it :)

I feel your tender kiss lightly on my neck
I look up at your stunningly blue eyes
I think bad things, but theres no need to check
For I know, time and time again he tries.
I hear your beat deep beneath your thin shirt
And feel it beating in time with my heart
Now I know you won't ever let me hurt
I should have known right from the very start.
How safe I feel with your arms around me
Makes me remember why I love you so
Looking at you, i just see pure beauty
I've told you before, that i'll never go.
I lay my head lightly on your firm chest
And I know i'm exceptionally blessed.


Submitted: June 24, 2009

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aliciab1804

Aww, so sweet and beautifully written. Really like this!

Thu, June 25th, 2009 4:02pm

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ahaa, thankyouu :)

Thu, June 25th, 2009 9:21am

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SarahPSilver

this is lovely!!

Thu, June 25th, 2009 4:16pm

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thanks :)

Thu, June 25th, 2009 9:20am

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Brian W

Okay this is really good but a question from someone dumb "What is a sonnet" and yes this is cute. Well written

Sat, June 27th, 2009 1:35am

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a sonnet is a form of poem that Shakespeare used in his plays, they generally talk about love, and have a really annoying structure to them, which makes them really hard to write.
ahaaa, thanks :)

Sat, June 27th, 2009 2:53am

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