Look Closely

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Life's Ponderings

Look closely at what is before you;

and see it with your heart.

Because if you see only with your eyes;

you will miss the most important parts.

The little bits and pieces

that are buried deep inside.

Just waiting to be discovered;

and no longer have to hide.

Like a rose that is slowly opening;

it's petals letting you get a glimpse within

of the inner core that is so protected

now open and caressed by the wind.

The most wonderful parts of a person;

are those that so many will never see.

For to find them will take patience;

and a willingness to set them free.

For the one who takes the time;

to go there and to explore.

The rewards will be so many;

when you finally open that door.


Submitted: April 02, 2012

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brucek

you are wise beyond your years. look long and deep. patience. and you will reap the rewards. thanks for this beautiful advice. and who will explore our sherry? that is the question.

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 3:30pm

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I think I finally ditched my block :) Good to see you. Thanks for stopping by, for the read and for your thoughtful comment. :) Sherry

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 10:28am

kdoll

Wow,"The most wonderful parts of a person; are those that so many will never see" what great truths in this line. I loved the whole poem however, this line really stuck out. I enjoy reading your work. You put so much feelings and emotion into your poems. You arevery compassionate about your poems. I like that and respect that as well. Keep them coming.

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 5:40pm

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I have always felt if you write from the heart you can't go wrong. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your beautiful comment. I love it when they reach someone. :) Sherry

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 1:38pm

BITSxOFxKINKY

and like flowers we are all beautiful if we take the time to look .. very nice indeed

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 7:23pm

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Thanks for reading you for your comment. :) Sherry

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 1:30pm

Mike Stevens

So many people look without seeing; excellent, Sherry!

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 7:39pm

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Thanks sweetie. :) Sherry

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 1:28pm

Insane Membrane

This is beautiful Sherry ... in a world that only looks @ judges by looks, its time we look deep inside ... I am consider producing a a new reality TV progamme called This is Me ... and promoting people for who they are and what they do, not what they look like or what surgeons and dentists and hairdressers and beauticians can make them look like ... inner beauty ... please then again no one else is considering me doing it but Fox if one is reading thats my idea ... well done Sherry

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 9:47am

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Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to read my musings. Your thoughts and comments are much appreciated. :) Sherry

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 4:44am

dibbledabble

You are so right Sherry. But we must look within ourselves to and make a conscious effort to show others by example what the best of a person can be.
So pleased that your smooth and flowing prose have returned for out delight

Warmly yours

Dibs

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 9:36pm

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Yep this block took a bit to ditch. Nice to see you here. Thanks for stopping, reading and for your wonderful comment. :) Sherry

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 8:40pm

Irwinagain

So true, so true, Sherry! I have a line on my profile that says 'I love all people - some just make it hard to do so' and I mean it, I do, but some people hide within themselves for protection, for whatever reason and you have to look very deep to discover them.

Mon, April 9th, 2012 9:25am

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Nice to see you again and thank you for taking time to stop by. Thanks for your wonderful comment. :) Sherry

Mon, April 9th, 2012 2:36am

Richmaggs

very prophetic and beautiful words. U did yourself proud with this one. This reads effortlessly and has a connection with nature as it ebbs and flows so beautifully.
I have a new poem called Blue Angel for Ian Dawns challenge.
Id love your feedback!

Sun, June 24th, 2012 6:13am

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Nice to see you again. Thanks for stopping in and I will be by to check out your work. :) Sherry

Sun, June 24th, 2012 4:07am

Sultry Alice

This is a beautiful piece. The message is excellent and the poetic telling is superb. The analogy comparing getting to know someone with the opening pedals of a rose is very clever and charming.

I really liked this a lot!

Thanks

Alice

Wed, January 23rd, 2013 6:49pm

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Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it. :) Sherry

Wed, January 23rd, 2013 2:54pm

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