What happens when love becomes so strong that logic falls apart...

Time well spent, Time truly earned,
Time for them together, to discuss all that had been heard.
Time for the joy, Time for the pain,
Time to play coy, and Time for them to claim
both one another in another one's arms,
never together, but never never quite far.
clinging closer and closer,
bringing what was always there.
keeping the promise,
and continuing the prayer.
Time vanished quickly.
So very very quickly
She knew that this was coming
the day that wouldn't end
Until that single moment, when he kissed her on her head,
shaking and waking from that oh so simple bed.
thinking and sinking into the thoughts that humans dread.
She was all alone in the world that never ends.
spinning and spinning without her best friend.
shaking and waking from the dreams of which she dread.
Thinking and sinking into a lonesome state.
drinking and winking to slowly pass her fate.
An actress she could have been a model or a star
but she felt deserted, alone with a scar.
Not that he left, not really for good.
but in her mind he did, and probably should,
fly far away and never return.
maybe go missing, stop following the herd.
It didn't matter now, she thought it for too long.
she tried to write it up, fit it to a song.
nothing seemed to work until what worked seemed wrong...
sliding the bloody red,
singing the words she dread.
he wouldn't leave her oh no, definitely not. Not if she were dead.
He found her on that floor simply questioning why
He held her in his arms as she began to cry
she let it all out.
let it flow down past her feet.
singing to the rhyme, and bleeding to the beat.
She was his to hold, forever and a day.
He just couldn't let it stay that very simple way.

Submitted: July 04, 2011

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jacky franco

AAWWW good poem!!(:

Mon, July 4th, 2011 1:45pm


Thank you :)

Mon, July 4th, 2011 9:29am


An excellent stuff, the beast part was that not even once you went out of rhythm. It is all so smooth,just like a water.Enjoyed reading it!

Tue, July 5th, 2011 6:37am


Thank you, I enjoy having works like this out there for fellow authors to appreciate :)

Mon, July 4th, 2011 11:40pm


It was really good! Now I'm not a really big fan of poems but this one drew me in! Good work :)

Tue, July 5th, 2011 3:48pm


Thank youuuu :)

Tue, July 5th, 2011 10:54am


I like the rhyme scheme, it's quite interesting, unique. And I like how you rhymed within the lines. Great poem, pretty crazy stuff, can I ask if there was any particular inspiration for this poem? My only suggestion: BIGGER FONT! aha, I know it may have been part of the effect but it's something that almost turned me off reading. Great job =)

Wed, July 6th, 2011 2:07pm


lol no it wasn't a part of the effect, I have only messed with the font on one poem I have posted so far for effect lol I am still in the process of copying and pasting my work from other places that I have them saved to lol But yeah I will most def. look into the fonts when I finish adding them all into this one site :) again thank you for the ideas :)

Wed, July 6th, 2011 7:12am


Another great poem! You're very tallented and I love reading your work! The way you had it rhyming was amazing! Keep up the amazing work! :)

Fri, July 15th, 2011 4:46pm


Yes ma'am :)

Fri, July 15th, 2011 10:42am

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