"CHOCOLATE"

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem about chocolates and my addiction to them...

“CHOCOLATE”

I love chocolates;

But who doesn’t?

They’re sweet and delicious and yummy;

With nuts and fudge and caramel.

 

When I take it in my mouth,

And swirl it with my tongue;

It melts just like the snow;

When the sun shines on it.

 

I feel a thousand tastes,

Exploding in my mouth.

Just like the fireworks when,

They explode in the sky;

And fill it with sparkling colors.

 

I slowly savor its taste;

And yearn for another bite,

But when I do get another;

I long for more and more.

 

I feel like I have gone,

In the Heaven of delectable tastes;

Where I don’t want the sensations to stop;

Or come back down to earth.

 

But when I find the wrapper empty,

I feel like someone has just;

Burst my delicious bubble;

And pulled me down to earth.

 

 

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Submitted: February 26, 2013

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Insane Membrane

lolz I love this and the picture at the bottom is to die for ...well done

I feel the same way

Tue, February 26th, 2013 9:40am

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THANK YOU SO MUCH, DEAR!

Tue, February 26th, 2013 2:18am

Criss Sole

Okay... now I really want chocolate.
I though this was a very cute poem, I enjoyed reading it.

Tue, February 26th, 2013 9:52am

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THANK YOU SO MUCH... GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT!

Tue, February 26th, 2013 2:19am

ashi17

Hey your poem is as delicious as chocolates, enjoyed each and every bite of it........ Mast!
Keep writing such a yummy stuff, take care :))

Tue, February 26th, 2013 10:21am

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Awww! thank you so much... i'll keep writing!

Tue, February 26th, 2013 2:38am

dynamic12

wow...very beautiful and just sweet like chocolate. Now I must eat a chocolate and the feel the sweet taste of your chocolaty poem ;)

Tue, February 26th, 2013 12:39pm

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thank you for your sweet comment...

Tue, February 26th, 2013 4:44am

FrootLoop246

This is so light and cute! I really enjoyed it!! :)

Tue, February 26th, 2013 1:54pm

Author
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thank you so much...:):)

Tue, February 26th, 2013 8:48am

lauricula

Loved your comparisons. And despite my stomach ache that I have right now, this made me crave chocolate.

Tue, February 26th, 2013 9:46pm

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awww! thank you so much and so sorry to hear of your stomach pain...

GET WELL SOON!:);)

Tue, February 26th, 2013 7:06pm

Stormbird Throneshaker

Love it!

Wed, February 27th, 2013 1:32am

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THANK YOU!

Tue, February 26th, 2013 7:06pm

venlockheart

nice poem... :) i do love chocolates too.. ehehe..

Wed, February 27th, 2013 7:42am

Author
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yeah , i am also crazy for chocolates...and i wrote this poem while i was eating some!

thank you for liking my poem...

Wed, February 27th, 2013 12:31am

Lisa Ayers

I'm addicted to chocolate too :)
This is cute and well done

Wed, February 27th, 2013 8:47am

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thank you so much...

Wed, February 27th, 2013 1:47am

Shama998

I AM IN LOVE with Chocolate and in love with your poem for sure love you and your poem is Amazing!!!!!

Wed, February 27th, 2013 6:53pm

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thank you so much, dear!

Wed, February 27th, 2013 10:24pm

tht1bakaauthor

So cute and amazing! ^O^

Wed, February 27th, 2013 11:40pm

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thank you!

Wed, February 27th, 2013 10:24pm

Coralie

Everyone loves chocolate!!! Okay, maybe not everyone, but in some form or another, everyone enjoys it. At least once in their life. Me, personally, I am addicted to it!!! C: Great poem. Makes me want to go get a bar from the store right now! XD

Thu, February 28th, 2013 1:12am

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that's why i wrote this poem, dear. i wanted all of you to want and eat chocolates...:):)

thank you for your precious comment...!

Wed, February 27th, 2013 10:27pm

hafsa91

mere tu moun ma pani a gya ha.nic epoem dear.sub k moun ma pani le ayi ho,lolz

Thu, February 28th, 2013 8:53am

Author
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thank you , dear...:)

Thu, February 28th, 2013 1:15am

BUnique

A sweet and mouth watering poem!

Thu, February 28th, 2013 11:35am

Author
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thank you so much, dear!

Thu, February 28th, 2013 3:53am

Mindy Rodman

i definitely get the message,good poem

Fri, March 1st, 2013 12:11am

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thank you so much!

Fri, March 1st, 2013 12:48am

thumblina Aka vandana

I really loved this poem just as much as I love chocolate.....

Sorry for the late comment....

Keep it coming sweety

Fantabulous...

Fri, March 1st, 2013 6:00am

Author
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thank you, sweetheart!

glad you liked it!

Fri, March 1st, 2013 12:50am

Regina De Corda

I'm hungry now! :)

Mon, March 4th, 2013 11:25am

Author
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well, you should go and eat some chocolate then...hahaha!

anyway, thanks 4 the comment!

Mon, March 4th, 2013 5:31am

bobthebuilder

Sweet! The poem, that is.

Sat, March 9th, 2013 3:31pm

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thank you!

Sat, March 9th, 2013 11:21pm

twinkletoes

ngl...it sounds sexual xxxx

Thu, March 14th, 2013 11:53am

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um... i really didn't write it in that way...
but, anyway, thanks 4 commenting!

Fri, March 15th, 2013 5:06am

ValeriyaPonomar

I came across your poem by accident. I'm glad I did.
I've been eating chocolate for more than 20 years of my life, never really considering the fact that it might be an addiction haha.
Just loved it, the rhyme and the topic!
You just put a smile on my face :)
Thank you for sharing this poem!

Wed, March 20th, 2013 1:22pm

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well, it is quite surprising that how many of us don't know that most of the things we crave the most are actually our addictions... we can't live without them! just like the chocolates! hehehe:)

anyway, thank you so much for your sweet comment, dear!

Wed, March 20th, 2013 10:49am

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