It is a story of a boy who loves his girl a lot but the girl being stupid enough never respects his love, but misses him the day he's finally gone from her life.


I’ll be ok.

I’ll be fine;

I’ll soon forget that old time.

But I remember some special memories.

You can call me lazy,

But I loved  the way you messed up things when I wasn’t


Yes I’m selfish.

But I loved the way you went against your loved ones

for me.

Yes I’m mean;

But I remember how you saved the money just for

buying a valentine gift for me.

You can call me dumb.

But I loved you saying that you made me a man from a


Though I don’t know what you actually mean.

I get tough and rude many a times,

But the way you tackled me; it was great.

I remember the nights you cried just because I hurt


And you never said a word to me.

I know I’m not worthy.

But I loved the way you made me feel like the most

precious person, one could choose to adore.

I know I’m healthy,

But I loved to hear “I love you my sweet teddy”.

I know I’m stupid.

But I loved to see you doing stupid things only to see

me smiling.

I know I’m crazy,

But I loved when you made perfect decisions on my


I pretended as if I was a kid;

But I loved when you pampered me as a little kid.

You can hate me.

But I can’t forget that you made me realize what love is.

I know I’m not beautiful,

But don’t know why you always said I’m gorgeous.

I know I’m not a singer,

But I still muse that song you wrote for me.

I know I never valued you;

Despite I was the shimmering gem for you.

How can you’d be so admirable?

And now that you’re gone away me,

I miss your presence.

Unable to wonder that we aren’t together now;

But we are living in my dreams happily.

Sorry, I was not sorry for the times I didn’t reply.

But I can’t change anything,

I know I’ve to reap what I sowed.

And I’m just waiting for that time

When you’d be mine forever in real.

Hope that day would surely come soon…………


Missing you baby, love you.......




Submitted: October 18, 2013

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Really really good! Loved this. It's a different ttype of poem. I enjoyed every bit of it and the flow was on point. I could feel his words. Double likes on this

Fri, October 18th, 2013 2:54pm


Thnkew :-)

Fri, October 18th, 2013 8:24pm

Vasanthi Papu

wow! that was a stunning poem packed fully with emotions and love. The flow was smooth and I loved reading it. Good job!

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