Short Story by: shubham pandey
food, indian, girls, dish, attire, chole, bhature-, salwar, kameez-
Submitted: July 24, 2010
© Copyright 2016 shubham pandey. All rights reserved.
I liked it a lot and the most amazing sentence was "I was near to a heart attack but thank god meera was in my heart to control it". Great:) You're a talented writer:)
thnx a lot....:)
Hiya:) beautiful and romantic story. Even though I am not an indian, I have watched that movie (Dil chatahai) with subs of course:)specially that song where the girl says something and the guy disagrees:) Requested to become your fan too:)
Hey can you pls contribute this story and any other fantastic work of yours to our website mudboard.com too:)Heres what we do at MB
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what do you reckon:)
thnx a lot for reading the story
i wud love to contribute...gimmie the link
awsm dear,,,,, pls keep on making these type of storys,,,, sply d romantic 1s.... ijust luv thm
thnx a lot .:)
Hello Brother, you are becoming Karan Johar of Booksie :), you know,there are others also who write Love stories, but the difference between them and you is::that we read their stories, but we feel yours..Another delightful passage of narration, well etched with touching lines, and remarkable emotions..
Junior, Keep them rolling.......
hehe,,,thnx bro,but there is no comparison between me and karan.,..he is an outstanding filmmaker,,,,but still thnx for eading and appreciating...:)
this is wat u coll a PERFECT PRESENTATION .........
i 2 likd the"" hert atack "" sntnce a lot ...
god bless ;);)
thnx a lot..:)
wow i really like it....you indeed are a great writer...yes i am from pakistan and i dont know why you are fasinatd by it ....lolzz well at least we are talking in a peaceful way rather than what our governments are doing...i say indians and pakistanis can indeed be friends....volience is not the option i mean you guys are good our religioms are just different...we aren't criticizing or anything...huff i dont know what to say about the government anyways coming back to your writing it is great i realy like it.. you are a talented writen and got great potential i must say...write moe you are aewsome!!!
u knw what, i think the same way and that is y i got excited as ur the first writer from paksitan at booksie for me atleast...thanx or appreciatng..
hiya:) thank you so much for giving us this story:) means a lot to me:) hope i'd be able to see you more on MB?:) if you have any more stuff paintings, photography pls contribute them us:)
awwww....it was beautiful...aayan ke dill me bhi hole hai...:(
seriously or jking?......anyways...thanx for reading..:)
hey buddy .. thats a grtt story ...beautifully scripted .. and the best part about your stories are that the enthusiasm of reading remains the same throughout .. its a master work..keep writing..
Well dear this one is even more amazing, the story is just too good.......i am so glad i read it. gud wrk ..........v gud wrk........now even i have started reading after a long time ......all thanks to you i say.....TKCR.
thnx a lot...:)
fantastic read :)
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