Short Story by: shubham pandey
Genre: War and Military
national, state, terrorist, defence, india, academy, bihar, organisation, leader, jaishe, mohhamad-, hamid, ansar-, mohamamd, nda-
Submitted: July 09, 2010
© Copyright 2016 shubham pandey. All rights reserved.
No doubt...it is a good story..Gave me goosebumps in the end. But lots of spelling mistakes...run it thru a spell check :)
thnx a lot...ya i dint edited it as i wanted to see how it goes with the readers....but ill definitly edit and try to fix the errors...
I really liked this one, it was really captivating, i just wanted to keep reading it.
hmm...bada hogaya ladka.....very good...though d one who is narrating dies!!...strange..jst think over this!!...but surely great!
ya the soul of the narratr was narating....just a weird try..:D
Interesting read (= very caputring indeed.
I really enjoyed this. And I'll become a fan soon, Shubham, I just like to choose the time. :) No worries, though, alright?
ya....alrite...:) and hey thnx alot for likin this
Interesting read...enjoyed it. If you like short stories...I recommend you check my list of short stories. I think "The After-School Project" will be a good story to start off with. Once again, well done! :)
thnx.....i ll definitly.....check out ur work..thanx
shubham u hav got d art f describing tfst evnt in esiest words wid a trmendous flow .......u very well know when 2 disclose what ...which is not a small thing ..........maintain that
evrytym i start ur story i think what m i goona comment as i hav sad evry gud or bad thing i felt abt ur skills .....bt evrytim after reading the story ur wrk provids me wid nw wrds to appraise u ....
thanx 4 writin
thanx for the praise but as i ahve said u i still need to impreove,,,..thnx a lot for reading
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