Does God Exist??

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Flash Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic
Its a short story of 3 friends , who are busy in their day today life but oneday , they had an experience which gave them reason to think does God exist???

Submitted: April 29, 2012

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Submitted: April 29, 2012

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Does God Exist???

 


Friday 4pm, “Beep Beep”, Vishu checked his mobile and wrinkles on his forehead started disappearing; those wrinkles were the reflection of another 5-day test match at the office “Analyzers (Friends), Developers (Romans) and testers (Countrymen)! With the end of another fucking month, we have been paid for the efforts we have put in to get fucked.” With one eye on the watch (which seemed like to have stopped ticking) they started discussing for the feast on the two day fest. A fact about the people working in IT industry: with every weekend starts the celebrations (i.e., a beginning after the end) and the celebrations becomes extra special if the weekend is accompanied by a text, “Your account has been credited with ____ (can’t disclose the salary here)”. A group of losers gave a damn, rather pretended, to this announcement, because they still had to challenge ‘the creator’, and had to dance this weekend for their masters, of course managers! Vishu shut down his computer, locked his shelf and walked towards Raj’s cubical, “Mr. Room- mate, it’s time now, close your shop! Keshu and Ravi are waiting for us”. Raj ignored Vishu’s word and continued his intimacy with desktop, while Vishu continued speaking like a reality show judge, who hardly pays attention to listeners’ reaction, “Sucker! Stop wasting your energy in fingering keyboard, there are better things for the same”. Raj answered him (while his fingers were still busy with keyboard) “Dude you are lucky, you don’t have any girl in your team, whole week I was busy in impressing Divya”. Then Vishu gave a devilish smile “By impressing, do you mean completing her codes on cost of yours?” and Vishu started laughing, “Common man! You know, I have a crush on her” Raj tried to defend himself, Vishu did not waste a second counterattacked his defence, “It does not mean that you’re her slave”. Raj with a helpless expression, “Ok don’t start it again, let me complete my work else the dick face (manager) will kill me on Monday with his boring speech on company’s values. Sometimes, I wonder how his family tolerates him, college lectures were better than talking to him for 5 minutes.” Vishu looked him with sympathy, “Ok, but Keshu has invited his girlfriend in dinner, along with her 3 roommates, aren’t you excited to see girls?” After listening to Vishu, Raj raised his head with the desperate expression and said, “You all lucky arse, I have lots of pending work to complete, I may be late, you all carry on, and don’t wait for me to start the party.”  Vishu started laughing and replied, “Don’t be sad dude, you have to impress Divya, and in case if I get lucky tonight, I’ll fuck one extra even on your behalf.” Raj pointed out his middle finger to him and started focusing on his computer. 
 
Vishu met other two roommates Keshu and Ravi at parking area, they started driving towards home, meanwhile Vishu explained them Raj’s problem. They bought liquors and chicken for dinner, soon after reaching room Keshu started preparing the dinner while other two were busy in personal grooming. Keshu shouted from the kitchen, “What the fuck! You muddle heads, perverts, this is so desperate, they are Sheri’s roommate, not sluts, stop fantasizing about them, I bet you both can’t fuck them in first meet and” Ravi interrupted him amidst his commentary “Having a girlfriend doesn’t grant you the ‘right to abuse your friend’ and as  they say, ‘practice makes a man perfect’”. Vishu shouted from the toilet, “Keshu, we are just trying to help you”, Keshu asked “How could you talk while pooping? And help in which sense” “Because I never use mouth for pooping” Vishu replied, to this Ravi added “The condom packets you bought, we were just trying to help you in finishing it, Vishu has already started using them.” Keshu with frustrated expression “You guys are impossible, please behave properly and don’t attempt rape on any of them.”
 
Keshu prepared dinner, asked his roommates to arrange it on dining table and he went to take bath, as Sheri texted him that she would arrive in next 15-20minutes.Both of them started obeying Keshu. “In singles’ life, committed friends are only hope left; they are like ray of hope in a dark cave.” Ravi said to Vishu. “Philosophy doesn’t suit you! Be normal and try to hide your lusty grin” Vishu replied with a smile and kept chicken curry on the table. Ravi continued “That rapist smile is my USB, hahahahaha.... hey Vishu let us add Viagra to this chicken, we will have gang-bang.” Vishu covered the pan “Please come out of your porn movies and its fantasy, and don’t say this in front of Keshu, else he’ll never invite them again.” Vishu lit a cigarette and sat on chair, “spray room-freshener to remove the intoxicating fragrance” Keshu said while combing his hair. Sheri with her most awaited three friends reached Vishu’s home, she introduced them to boys and soon they start talking to each other, while Ravi was quietly staring Sheri, as she had cheated him. She walked towards the kitchen to bring wine from the refrigerator, Ravi followed her, “This is cheating, why can’t you bring at least one pretty girl with you, there are many in your friend list on Face Book, I haven’t seen these girls in your album yet.” Sheri laughed and said “Next time I’ll never cheat on you, and stop peeping into girl’s facebook accounts, Mr.Despo.”  Then again the chit-chat session started, gradually Ravi also joined them, Homo sapiens easily adapts to the adverse situations, although, this was a favourable one!
 
By 11 PM Raj came home with a exhausted face,  they all had dinner."So Raj, work completed?" Vishu questioned him, he replied with same exhausted expression "No, I'll be working even tomorrow".  Soon after dinner, Raj went to sleep,  he had to go to office even on Saturday else he was to exceed his deadline, all sent him to bed with a sympathy and promised that they would repeat the same the next Friday. 
 
6A.M. seven people consumed 9 beers, 2 full whiskies accompanied by a bottle of wine, everyone went to sleep. Sheri and Keshu shared one room, while other two rooms were sorted and grouped by the fairer sex. “Dude, I'll lose my virginity one day, but I wish that comes, in this birth  ” Ravi said, Vishu turned round and slept, as if he did not hear anything. 
 
9A.M. Saturday morning, Vishu’s phone rang but after 4 to 5 calls he noticed it, “Hmmmm...”  He was still under alcohol affect, but suddenly he sat on the bed with a shocking voice “WHAT? WHEN” It was a call from one of their friend, who called to inform that Raj had an accident, and 3 units of blood were required of O negative group. Vishu informed the other two, as they were too high to drive; they booked a taxi, three of them on their way to hospital explored their phonebook, but unfortunately, Raj had rarest blood group. Keshu uploaded on FB for blood donor, but they only had likes and comments in reply, if any girl would had uploaded same then result should have been positive. Vishu made a call to the person, who informed them about Raj, “Dude, please inform the doctor to check in blood bank, we are not able to arrange blood”. But, that day destiny had its own plans, there were only 2 units of blood in blood bank of same group, still 2 units were required. “Can’t he have any common blood, group like AB+ve or something” Ravi said, other two gave him a look, which directly meant-“Shut your mouth” .There were very few people in their contact of O-ve blood group, but most the friends had boozed Friday night(around 80% of software engineers drink alcohol) Keshu and one from those 3 friends of Sheri, had same blood group but they can’t donate, because they drunk and minimum interval of 24hours is compulsory for donating blood. Keshu started crying (people often get emotional after drinking), “Oh God, please help us out, else I’ll regret throughout the life that alcohol of mine, took my friend’s life”. “Don’t worry ch....ch...child everything will be fine” Ravi said, who was too drunk to understand the seriousness of that moment. “Vishu, ask him to keep his mouth shut, else I swear I’ll kick him out, why we are taking him with us?” Keshu said in anger tone. “Chill Keshu, he is not in his senses, just be happy that, he hasn’t puked yet” Vishu replied, texting his friends to search donor. All of a sudden, driver applied brake, both started shouting on him but Ravi tried to open the gate to step out, “We are getting late, please don’t stop unnecessarily and Vishu please hold him (Ravi) tightly” Keshu yelled on driver and Vishu. Driver replied hesitatingly, “Sorry Sir, it’s my brother’s taxi, from here  he’ll take you, he was getting ready at the time you called and you told its urgent so I came and......” ,“Ok ok call him fast” Vishu interrupted, before he could complete his sentence. New driver came, he started the taxi and within few seconds he realised they need donor of blood group O-ve. New driver turned back “Sir don’t worry my blood group is O-ve, I will donate and I know two person they will also donate”, they reached hospital in half n hour from their home.
Doctors asked donors to complete the formalities; within 15minutes other two men also reached hospital. All three donors were given glucose, ParleG biscuits and a glass of juice and Ravi who was still confused to understand the situation was left inside the taxi. Sam(Raj’s friend, who gave the news of accident) and Keshu were busy with doctors in discussing the medical issues of Raj, while Vishu was with donors. All three donors after donating blood left the hospital after 1 hour “Thank You Krishna,Vinayak and Dev (donors name), you all helped me today and saved my friend’s life, I’ll always remember your help, you all are best human being I ever met” Vishu was not getting proper words to thank them. “It’s ok Sir” they replied in chorus, “Can you please drop him home?” Vishu asked Krishna pointing on Ravi, who was unaware of whole drama and slept in taxi. “Sure sir, but Sir next time drink in limit” Krishna suggested Vishu and started the taxi.
 
6pm evening, Raj was in his conscious, Vishu explained how they arranged the donors. Raj wanted to thank Krishna and asked Vishu to call him. He called Krishna “the number you trying to reach is temporarily out of service”, he thought it might be due to network problem, he tried again after an hour but same reply, this hour got converted to days but still same reply .Soon Vishu and friends got back to their normal routine life, again Friday then party, same issues of life like girls, sex, boozing, night outs, seniors, workload etc. But still whenever Vishu and gang recall that moment, they always get confused and questions get piled on in their mind like -who were they? Why they donated blood? Whether it was just a coincidence that, same day Krishna changed his number or God helped us in disguise of those drivers.
 
Many may think that there is nothing known as supernatural power or God, but once, recall various moments of your, yours parent’s, friend’s or neighbour’s life you might get few incidents which give us such dilemma, where we think same, or its just God who keep us reminding about their presence or just a human being whose good work and help for other humanity make them stand in the queue of GOD. Many, publicize themselves to prove that they are God, but deeds of few people, make us believe that if there is a God, then it is similar this. Jesus, Lord Buddha was born as human, but their deeds made them God. In this world, we think, we have achieved everything, few great minds claims that they know the fact of each thing happening in this world, but still, there are few mysteries which defeats the great minds.


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