Road And Sky

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Literary Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

Here just trying to sow the pain of lover who loses his love


In this mysterious God’s creation,

Lord always does not support all its creation.

Have you all ever noticed the road, and tried to be empathetic.

Have you all ever thought why he is so silent?

Among all creations of lord why he is so dumb?

I got the answer when I suffered from the same pain.


The road wants to tell, his sad tale.

I can feel his emotions and understand his notions.

The reason of his sadness is his loneliness.

The pain is of separation,

 He runs thousands of miles to touch the horizon, but never understands the illusion.


The road is separated from sky, and she was sent so high.

His love was sky but lord sent her away.

But still road runs miles to take her in his way.

From distance he just keep staring the sky.

His pain even soaked his tears, but still he is fighting for that high.


The road is now dead, without his mate.

But his soul still lives in the illusion, and run towards the horizon.

I have realised his failure and pain of separation,

That is why I said you this as fiction.

I realised his feelings only because,

If I am the road then my love is the sky.


Submitted: April 02, 2012

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Areen Abukishek


Tue, April 3rd, 2012 9:06am


thanx :)

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 9:06am

glitter snow426

oh wow, simply awesome, fantastic, SUPER COOL!!! love this sparkling gem, you are soooooo good!!

Thu, April 5th, 2012 2:01pm


hey thanx a lot Vincey
m nwdays wrking on a sort story ope u'll like it

Thu, April 5th, 2012 9:06am

meenakshi sharma

its nice..really good work . /

Sat, April 7th, 2012 5:05am


thnx meenakshi

Sun, April 8th, 2012 5:59am


Cool :)

Mon, April 9th, 2012 11:32am



Thu, April 12th, 2012 4:11pm


I love how your not afraid to write aout God. I admire that a lot. I am so honnored that you would stop by my page. I'm gonna press like and become a fan!!! Love your work please keep me update.

Tue, April 10th, 2012 6:42pm


Hey thnx a lot Shawna........... Its my honour tht u like my writing.... sure i'll see ur page..... kepp me updated

Thu, April 12th, 2012 1:41pm


Beautiful work of art.

Mon, May 14th, 2012 2:17am


thnx a lot...

Mon, May 14th, 2012 1:19am


I'm not a religious person but I do love this poem, it has an important message in it. You wrote it in a delightful and lovely way. thumbs up

Tue, May 15th, 2012 2:19pm


actualy i got this thought when I was in train, I saw road, sky and horizon nd thought this.....
thnx :)

Wed, May 16th, 2012 3:24am

Christian Taylor

This is absolutely beautiful! One of my favorite poems that I have read today! :)

Keep up the good work! Instant fan!

Sun, November 24th, 2013 1:17am


Thnx Christain

Sat, November 30th, 2013 11:21pm

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