The Truth Unseen
(Narrated by the Earth)
The second I was born,
I had nothing at all that you see.
You were not yet present, and none knew what I’d be.
Never did I disobey the one, who created me,
So should you always be.
The truth’s very clear, yet remains unseen,
That we all were nothing at all,
And so shall we again be.
I don’t equal even a wing of a bee,
In the eyes of the one who created me.
But you were sent here for being tested,
To show your worth, or else get wasted!
So show your worth, and pay the price,
To get what is called as the paradise!
Submitted: December 14, 2015
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Very profound poem, I like 'the truth's very clear, yet remains unseen'--it sort of relates to our politics here, even though it's about religion
Wed, May 17th, 2017 4:06pmLove it!
Wed, July 5th, 2017 11:26amThis is ingenious! You have explained, taught, reasoned, & enlightened, all in a few words! I really like the creativity of this piece, so I tell you, this is very well done!
Thu, July 13th, 2017 5:32pmBeautiful poem, I like it even more because it involves elements of space. For me, I'm always interested in hearing about how people believe things like the earth and the universe were created, it's hard to comprehend given it's hard to think about events before our lifetime. Your flow, rhythm and rhyming were all great, well done!
Fri, July 14th, 2017 9:41pm
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Thanks for the comment!
The beauty and greatness of the creation speak about the qualities hidden in the creator.
That's why God gave us intelligence and knowledge,
Telling us to know about his hidden power by observing what is around us.
Nobody has yet created such wonderful memory and data storage systems like what each cell in our body has!
A wonderful poem. I love it how you express such deep and important messages through simple, yet elegantly written verse. Thumbs up!
Mon, July 24th, 2017 6:23amThe creativity on this site never ceases to amaze me.
This was a unique and well written poem. The message that Earth is giving humans is quite clear.
Thank you!
Very contemplative. I like the simplicity of your prose to describe something profound. It's a nice contrast.
Tue, June 19th, 2018 2:57amWell written. I like your phrase “truth as unclear and unseen”. Speaks of faith and that life doesn’t after death.
Sun, July 22nd, 2018 9:10pmLove the humility of the earth in this poem, especially in our big world, we make things so complicated.
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Beautiful poem and very much close to the theory of one God . Bless you and wish you all the best.
Thu, December 22nd, 2016 3:22pmAuthor
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Thanks a lot. I hope you read more and like it!
Sat, December 31st, 2016 8:55pm