The lie that is my life

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Um

Tears that I hold back,

Because I can't stand,

To let them see beneath,

The LIE that is my LIFE.

So I plaster on a fake,

Smile so that they won't,

So that they don't see,

Through the LIE that,

Never seems to end.


Submitted: October 19, 2010

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djoulde

i love it!!! but it's so sad!!!! you have a talent with words! they are beautiful, but i say cry if you want to. whoever got something to say bout it, forget them, its the people that will hold you while you cry that counts...so cry damn it!!!

Mon, October 25th, 2010 2:48am

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Your comment made me laugh, but remember, sometimes it's not the people who stop it, but you yourself, because you may not be able to stop...

Mon, October 25th, 2010 9:32am

lillopez95

this is really amazing.
i may be wrong but i think i can relate, you have to put on a smile and pretend that you don't want to cry because you have to lie to yourself that you don't as well.
even if im wrong this is really good(:

Thu, November 11th, 2010 8:20pm

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You are mostly right... Thanks... (:

Thu, November 11th, 2010 12:59pm

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