the first stage

Reads: 421  | Likes: 0  | Shelves: 0  | Comments: 0

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

More Details
Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic
About a young girl in the first stage of an eating disorder.

Submitted: December 02, 2009

A A A | A A A

Submitted: December 02, 2009

A A A

A A A


there once lived this girl in a normal world, her parents loved her, she had great friends and life was bliss. one day she looked in the mirror and saw this person standing in front of her. \"who is this?\" she asks \" why its you!\" she says. the voice that she heard was not a voice she heard before, who is the voice. looking around the young girl couldn't see a face to match this voice. tried as she might no one ever heard of this voice she described. Her mother said it was \"just hormones\" that \"every girl your age goes threw it.\" \"ok\" she said as she walked back to her room. \"it's just a girl thing.\" the next morning the young girl a woke to a strange feeling inside her head, regret for something that she didn't understand. fluffing it off she gets ready and runs down to meet the kids at school. \"hey every one\" she said. they greeted her back. they all played teether ball and had a great fun. However then something tragic happened. it was lunch time and the young girl had bought a BBQ sandwich and milk ( its what she always got) and walked to her friends. \" as she sat down she noticed her friends were talking about this awful subject. \"did you here about this thing that when you eat you get sick?\" one friend said \"oh my gosh man i am so fat look at me.\" another one said. as the Young Girl took out her sandwich and took her first bite the voice came back again. \"don't eat that.\" it said \"do you know what you are doing to your self you nasty pig?\" a strange look came upon her face. \"what wrong?\" one girl asked. \"nothing i will be right back\" the young girl replied. in the bathroom alone she stares at her self in the mirror. \" see what you have done!\" the voice screamed \" this is what they call FAT!\" one single tear ran down her face. \" what should i do.\" the young girl asked the voice. \" i thought you would like to know, you see that stall go in it.\" confused as the girl was she followed the order of the hire power as all good little girls do. \"good now kneel down.\" again the young girl did what she was told. \"now what?\" she asked. \" now you take your first finger and your middle finger and stick them down your throat. \" why would i want to do that?\" the young girl asked. \"well you want to be skinny again don't you?\" \"well i guess so.\" the girl replied. \" move your fingers up and down your throat until you throw up, get all of that nasty food out; food is the enemy.\" the girl did so and she threw up just like the voice told her too, how ever the girl didn't stop. The girl kept on going until she saw blood. \" good, good Christina.\" the voice said. when the girl was finished she looked up at the celling with tears in her eyes, high and asked \"what will happen to me know?\" the voice replied \"you shall see, you shall see.\"


© Copyright 2020 silvershadow. All rights reserved.

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Add Your Comments: