Not what you might expect. This is the personification of love.

wearing a lace dress
fiery dress and black boots
love walks in the room
all eyes melt on him like ice

he walks in with grace
to send himself to all
for they think its love they want
but only disgrace is on their face

with a voice full of confidence
he speaks to the room
and every ear listens
to his words of love intense

"brothers, sisters, you mock me
but i am the one who you want
i'm the reason behind your marraiges
and the best fucks, not in dreams

and yet you sit there so stupid
looking at me like i'm trash
yet i was worshipped long ago
i was once known as cupid"


Submitted: July 30, 2007

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Tesseth

lol
That was interestingly bizarre!
VERY VERY Creative!

Mon, July 30th, 2007 7:34pm

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lol thanks a lot ^_^

it was for a contest (personify anything) so i thought i'd make love a man in a dress ^_^

thanks again.

Mon, July 30th, 2007 12:44pm

Dmonik

Gotta tell you Hon, I've worn a dress, and it wasn't fun (not for me anyway, lol) I like this piece. A cross dressing cupid, imaginative and original, then again, cupid is regualrly depicted as a baby, so anything goes I guess, lol. Keep up the good work, and if you see a bear....*Hands Sinead a shotgun*

Mon, July 30th, 2007 7:52pm

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-takes the gun and backs away- lol
i never wear dresses. you can't do much in them...'cept pull lol

ewww...paedophillia, or what? lol

thanks bro, for the support, comments, and the gun XP

Mon, July 30th, 2007 12:59pm

Treshawna

once again sinead you have proved that you are a great writer and creative.

Well done

Mon, July 30th, 2007 8:10pm

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awwh thanks hon ^_^

coming from you, that means so much ^_^

Mon, July 30th, 2007 1:11pm

boneman

Very interesting poem. A good twist on cupid as it approches valentines day.

Very good and very creative

Peace

Boneman

Wed, February 6th, 2008 1:18am

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thanks a lot, but i wrote this ages ago; its got nothing to do with valentines.
imo, valentines is just a commercial day for businesses to make money out of romance, but hey, i'm cynical.

thanks ^^

Wed, February 6th, 2008 3:03pm

wolffe

clever and bold. Nice.

Sat, April 19th, 2008 2:36am

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thanks.

Sun, April 20th, 2008 10:09am

EAweathefield

I like your idea a lot--the personification of Love as a cross-dressing man. However, I think there were a few things you could improve. You repeated some words unecessarily, and some of your language was a little off for the mood of the poem. I'm sure an edit or two will fix this--it's always good to look over something you've written, anyway. Still, love the idea, and the imagery was vivid.

Tue, January 27th, 2009 11:39pm

becky1990

Haha- Very nice, I loved it!

Sat, January 31st, 2009 3:24am

lunaperra

I really liked this, arty & cool - I love cupid's attitude!

Sat, February 14th, 2009 11:56am

Rolli

you really captured that moment of glory walking in the room and the look they give 'Love
but 'Love throwing it right back in there faces

Tue, February 24th, 2009 5:01am

Laura Plum

HI There ... finally found a poem that made me write a comment today. I like this. Why? It's creative, interesting and says a lot about how we might feel about love in today's world. Nice write.

Sat, March 28th, 2009 10:56pm

zer0

A decent poem.

The rhythm is fine, flows well enough.

It gets a little repetitive at points; certain words are used more than is necessary.

The rhyme in the line “but only disgrace is on their face” feels a little forced and unnecessary.

The imagery is fine.

Depicting cupid as a cross dressing man is an interesting concept.

All in all good work. Keep writing.

Sun, April 5th, 2009 6:41pm

achiras

Hello, I wrote my hometown is Vancouver on my profile.
But actually my first language is not English.
I am still studying english and my grammar is terrible.
(Please understand me :D)
Whatever, your poet is so nice that I want to use this poem for my English Project.
(Example for Personification)

Can I use this poem for my project and ask your name?
(Cause I need writer's name on my page)

Wed, May 27th, 2009 7:44am

Nazaya

That was cute...I like it!

Mon, November 9th, 2009 9:13pm

Havok

heh heh... the first thing that came to my mind was... Jeffree Starr....
but i love this poem. it's excellent.

Wed, December 9th, 2009 5:45pm

Adam Erickson

This poem grabs you like a bouncer and escorts you to the end by force. Well done.

Tue, February 16th, 2010 2:42am

Lindsay Love

I was curious about the title. very interesting look at love.

Wed, April 28th, 2010 7:45pm

Jinisha

hmmm....i have written a poem about love too...i took her as a gal...check out in ma poem...by the way...that was a lovely poem

Thu, April 29th, 2010 9:03am

Cleo Tuesday

creative, yes. coulda been stronger with rhymes and the ending is sort of blunt.

Sat, May 1st, 2010 6:26pm

xXCapriSunXx

This must have taken a lot of time and imagination. I wasn't quite expecting this at all, and I was confused as i read it becaue i was trying to figure out what you were talking about. But once i got to the end, i totally understood. I love this piece of writing. Especially the end. "...I was once known as cupid" Yup. That was my favorite part.

Anyway, keep writing! I adored this piece.

xXCapriSunXx

Mon, January 31st, 2011 9:22pm

urvashi joshi

very creative.. i like the way u use words.. plz read my work and comment..

Fri, February 11th, 2011 10:03pm

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