Poem by: sineadmc1990
Submitted: July 15, 2007
you see beauty,
i see an empty shell.
you see love,
i see ugly.
you see pretty,
i see fear.
you see lust,
i see hatred.
you see me,
so do i.
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Eric JHRB Egan
I just read "My mirror, my lover, my liar", once again, great. Dark, very dark.
thanks. all my work is dark ^_^
Excellant, again :) We4 never show the 'real' us. The only possible time we do, is at death. Then we cannot hide behind strength and brave words, it's too late. Heartfelt, emotive and honest! Great Job!
even in death we try to be brave to not let our loved ones down. ^_^
This is a poem I can relate to all to well. It may be short but it is very effective. Well done.
thank you ^_^ sometimes fewer words are needed to get across grander messages and meanings.
Knock knock. Who's there? Sarah. Sarah who?
Sarah doctor in the house!?!
Speaking of which, was that mirror made by Hermann Rorschach?
Okay, now don't you go telling anyone, but I actually think that this is a nice piece of writing (with a catchy title) that epitomizes perspective. And I'm not surprised that it won silver because it deserves it.
PS: I accept cheques, credit cards and international money transfers.
firstly: that was the worst joke i've ever heard. worse than "why did the chicken cross the road?"
-whispers- i'll keep your little secret safe...don't worry... everyone likes my work lol
thanks for probably the weirdest comment i've had ^_^
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