Paradox of Life

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

What? We have to have a summary? That's stupid...

the paradox of life
breaks the hearts of many
with its lies in the truth
of thousands of people
feeling the electricity
of millions who wasted energy
by taking their teens
and drowning the spark
that made their youth tolerable
that is the paradox of life


Submitted: September 09, 2007

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silverscent

I enjoyed this, I felt a touch of sarcasm that was quite refreshing. Thanks for sharing.

Sun, September 9th, 2007 8:54pm

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sarcasm is my middle name.

thanks for the comment.

Sun, September 9th, 2007 1:58pm

Doc Scurlock

I know: you have to have a summary even if it's not appropriate. It's absurd. I really like this brief nihlistic outburst. Worryingly true.

Mon, September 17th, 2007 5:20pm

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thanks, dude.

its stupid. i might just put crazy one liners in the summary from now on lol

glad you like ^_^

Mon, September 17th, 2007 11:08am

zer0

Nice short free-verse poem. I think "nihlistic outburst" sums it up nicely although he spelt nihilistic wrong. I liked it very much.

Wed, November 21st, 2007 10:52am

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thanks a lot ^_^

Wed, November 21st, 2007 12:00pm

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