When you've ran out of people, turn to corpses.

hearts around me
all sent by you
on our wedding day
is this all true?

thinking back to when
you used to breathe
i still can't believe
i once asked you to leave

wrapping your love around me
wearing the white dress you've not yet seen
wanting you to be beside me
wishing for you to breathe

you're the corpse
i fell in love with
you're the corpse
i want to be with
you're the corpse
that i married
you're the corpse
who i was with
on the wedding night


Submitted: July 15, 2007

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Dmonik

Superb, as always Sis. I think we can thank Tim Burton and The Great Dawno for the inspiration, lol. I like how your character is a corpse husband, as opposed to the usual corpse bride :) Excellant!

Tue, July 17th, 2007 9:18am

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i've not seen corpse bride! its all quoth! lol

thanks bro.

Wed, July 18th, 2007 10:25am

Treshawna

5/5 very impressed with ur great writing technique, loved it.

you might think i am over reacting but i dont care, one of the best i have ever read on this website.

Mon, July 23rd, 2007 11:03pm

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wow thank you. from someone so talented, as yourself that means more than i can say. thank you ^_^

Tue, July 24th, 2007 11:17am

DevinSan

I liked it. I love dark things.

Sat, August 18th, 2007 1:10am

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lol thanks ^_^

i'm about to post my darkest piece. ever.

Sun, August 19th, 2007 8:29am

YuperMan25plus3

i like it.

Dark indeed...very good

Sun, September 9th, 2007 12:58am

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thank you.

Sun, September 9th, 2007 10:04am

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