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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic


the last time that i saw you i was blind

and all the lights and tears and bends that wind

covered you up and stole you away

without you hearing the words i dont say

i tried to follow faster but i fell

and everything i had, i couldnt tell.

and i was hoping youd hit he brakes and i could run

but you walk and you dance and you never ever turn

i hear your words in every single day

i hear them in things you used to say

and i notice all the things that i ignore

why are you never dancing, dancing through my door?



Submitted: March 02, 2012

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Very interesting poem. The premise capivates me. You make me read between your words and I get something new each time!

I like it

Fri, March 2nd, 2012 3:34am


yeah, i didn't spend long on it. just wrote it in a few minutes so don't judge it too harshly :) Thanks again for taking the time to read it x

Fri, March 2nd, 2012 5:30am

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