I sleep; Dreams; I dream of terrible things; I fall in darkness as I awake; I hear bellows everywhere; I cant see; I'm trembling;
Suddenly, I fall back in my deep,dark sleep; I watch myself sleep for the last time and fly away; I fly away where I not know of;
I am gone; Find me.
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Wow, great job. This poem really expresses dark emotion. I love the last part, "I am gone; Find me." It was my favorite part. Gets a like from me!
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Thanks a bunch! A lot of people thought the last part was really depressing..
its a really interesting take on showing that dark emotion. The last part isnt depressing, it makes you want to know more! keep writing!
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Thank you! :)
not depressing its enlightening its your want to move on to a better place, now find me. I like the suspense you built. well done
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Thank you for the input! :)
I thought this was really really good!! I love that movie, too! One of the scariest movies I've ever seen! Great work with this one!!
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Thank you! Oh and here is the trailer for "Insidious Chapter 2"! http://www.imdb.com/video/imdb/vi3998459417 Hope you like it!!! :D
This poem was actually really good. I love the format of it. IT makes it seem even more unique and cool. Great Job!!
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Thank you!
I love the film and this poem is awesome. You describe the other world really well in such a few words. Good poem :)
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Thank you so much!
I haven't seen that movie, but I've been wanting to for a while now. I like the ending "I am gone; find me" Slightly creepy and I could imagine a child's voice saying it, then eerie music playing.. gone job, the dark emotions are well expressed through such a small amount of words. :)
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Thank you and you can watch the movie on Netflix and Megashare.info . Here is the link: http://megashare.info/#Search,Insidious It's free too!!!
So ambiguous, so simple... So perfectly insidious! Good job mate!
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Thank you!
I think this poem has a lot of emotion to it, and he ready for an exciting journey! The whole poem describe insidious well, I think. Good job and thanks for sharing:)
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Thanks! Have you seen Insidious? It's so good. They are making part 2! So excited. It's on Friday, September 13 . Thanks again for the comment!
It was very nice. I enjoyed it. You did a good job. I hope to read more of your poems. :)
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Thank you!! I'm working on my next one right now!! :)
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