I sleep; Dreams; I dream of terrible things; I fall in darkness as I awake; I hear bellows everywhere; I cant see; I'm trembling;
Suddenly, I fall back in my deep,dark sleep; I watch myself sleep for the last time and fly away; I fly away where I not know of;
I am gone; Find me.
Submitted: June 28, 2013
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its a really interesting take on showing that dark emotion. The last part isnt depressing, it makes you want to know more! keep writing!
Sat, June 29th, 2013 8:25pm
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Thank you! :)
Sat, June 29th, 2013 1:27pm
not depressing its enlightening its your want to move on to a better place, now find me. I like the suspense you built. well done
Mon, July 1st, 2013 11:27pm
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Thank you for the input! :)
Mon, July 1st, 2013 4:33pm
I thought this was really really good!! I love that movie, too! One of the scariest movies I've ever seen! Great work with this one!!
Sun, July 14th, 2013 3:18pm
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Thank you! Oh and here is the trailer for "Insidious Chapter 2"! http://www.imdb.com/video/imdb/vi3998459417 Hope you like it!!! :D
Mon, July 15th, 2013 10:00am
This poem was actually really good. I love the format of it. IT makes it seem even more unique and cool. Great Job!!
Wed, July 17th, 2013 11:12pm
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Thank you!
Wed, July 17th, 2013 4:16pm
I love the film and this poem is awesome. You describe the other world really well in such a few words. Good poem :)
Thu, July 18th, 2013 1:04pm
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Thank you so much!
Thu, July 18th, 2013 4:43pm
I haven't seen that movie, but I've been wanting to for a while now. I like the ending "I am gone; find me" Slightly creepy and I could imagine a child's voice saying it, then eerie music playing.. gone job, the dark emotions are well expressed through such a small amount of words. :)
Fri, July 19th, 2013 5:07pm
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Thank you and you can watch the movie on Netflix and Megashare.info . Here is the link: http://megashare.info/#Search,Insidious It's free too!!!
Sat, July 20th, 2013 1:16pm
So ambiguous, so simple... So perfectly insidious! Good job mate!
Tue, July 23rd, 2013 11:09am
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Thank you!
Sat, July 27th, 2013 9:25pm
I think this poem has a lot of emotion to it, and he ready for an exciting journey! The whole poem describe insidious well, I think. Good job and thanks for sharing:)
Wed, July 31st, 2013 2:32am
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Thanks! Have you seen Insidious? It's so good. They are making part 2! So excited. It's on Friday, September 13 . Thanks again for the comment!
Tue, July 30th, 2013 7:46pm
It was very nice. I enjoyed it. You did a good job. I hope to read more of your poems. :)
Fri, August 2nd, 2013 6:13pm
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Thank you!! I'm working on my next one right now!! :)
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Lona333
Wow, great job. This poem really expresses dark emotion. I love the last part, "I am gone; Find me." It was my favorite part. Gets a like from me!
Fri, June 28th, 2013 12:11amAuthor
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Thanks a bunch! A lot of people thought the last part was really depressing..
Thu, June 27th, 2013 6:43pm