The First Day of the Beginning

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

Its about starting over...Really

What is wrong us. Every single one of us. i have seen so much dark and then the light glimpses through it all. i see it so bright now.But i know sadly it will fade. Then again I so deeply want it to stay.


Submitted: May 24, 2008

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Nadilyn and Lydian

Make it longer, kinda short. Although I like it
That shining light of kindled flame, with time will erode away. A gentle a whisper, a story no more, a memory that no longer exists. So much darkness, in an endless chasm. A chasm of lost memories, dark souls, and creeping hunger of fallen dreams. So bright, so bright. I do not want to go, to stay in this place, surrounded by darkness

Sorry about that long paragraph.... Your few sentences has actually inspired me...for some reason...

Sun, May 25th, 2008 8:35pm

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thanks thes one of the best comments i have ever recieved

Mon, June 2nd, 2008 3:35pm

KGR

Mind sharing what is/was so bright? I want to now if I can help make it better. :)

Tue, May 27th, 2008 4:02pm

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anytime baby :)

Mon, June 2nd, 2008 3:35pm

annemarie

When I read this short piece I thought that the imagery was good. I sensed that the brightness represented the truth to your MC and that when you are faced with a glimpse of the truth it is just a fleeting thing that can leave you as quickly as it came.

Sat, February 28th, 2009 4:57pm

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i try to produce images when i write so thanks :)

Sat, February 28th, 2009 3:45pm

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