a christmas murder

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic
be aware this might scare children between 5 and 9 even though i am 10 and i wrote it haha xxx

Submitted: July 11, 2012

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one christmas morning the day was friday the 25th of december 1869 and there was a street called eerie bucanning road and everyone was afraid to come out of there houses and when ever they do it will be when this strange woman is in bed or not in her window her name is mrs donton and she has no husband becouse she is to scary she has no daughters and this is where the story begins.

one fine christmas in 1869 there was an old 65 year old lady and she lived in a street called eerie bucanning road and you will never see a body in that road becouse of this scary woman called mrs donton and she looks out of her window all day and all night she stays awake until 11:oclock and that is when everyone goes to the shop becouse if you come out of your house she runs out of her door and takes you into her house and grabs you by the neck but act's all nice until you tell her why you and your family downt come out of there house and when you tell her she goes mad and kills you i learned the hard way but i got away thankfully. i has just moved in 1 week ago and obiosly nobody came out of there house so they never told me about this scary woman and i was playing in the street on my bike and i saw this woman looking at me through the window and she came out of her house and told me to come in her house so i did i thought she was friendly and she took me into her living room and gave me a glass of coke and said she had never seen me before and i said yes my grandma and grandpa bought me my mum and dad this house 1 week ago for christmas becouse we where living with them and she said well my name is mrs dolton and i need a you to get me somethink out of my bedroom can you do that for me and i said being friendly and all that yes of course and what do u want me to get so she lead me up to the bedroom and tryed to kill me but i said i want to wisper you somthink and when she leant in to hear i pushed her and got away as soon as i could and i also found out that the police where looking for her aswell becouse she killed he husband and her 2 daughters and then my mother rachel rang the police and she got arrested for life and the street finaly all came out in the sun and i made 5 new friends called thomas and chloe who are brother and sister thomas the same age as me 10 chloe 8 becki 10 lauren 10 and carly 9 . so thats my story can you please leave a comment and be my fan thanks for reading


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