Your love is like the outer space

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
Telling the story of a person in love by comparing the qualities of the one they're in love with to the wonderful, amazing, curious, outer space. Sorry this is a bad poem but I was bored and needed to write something. Remember please post suggestions to help me improve my writing I would really appreciate it.

Submitted: November 25, 2012

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Your eyes twinkle like the stars in space

Your teeth glow as the moon at night

You are the one I revlove around

Like planets to their sun

So dependent on the light to warm

The cold and lonely soul

Your beauty is a galaxy

Your flaws to be discovered

So many wanting to crater you

All the people in the world

Are only dwarf stars compared to you

For you are a mighty sun

The attraction through all of space

The one who lights the way through life

Who eclipses all evil to come

The evil to break the heart

You are like the outer space

A never ending wonder

A wonder that many will take the risk

To travel alone in the dark

To travel on a midnight path

Just to discover more

You much like th outer space

Leading me on my way

To find You in my arms at night

To love you for the rest of my days


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