Camp Dragon I: The Tree of Dragons

I really enjoyed the chapter, the fight was awesome!

Another good chapter, I'm really enjoying the story so far, and I can't wait to see where it goes and get a look a all the dragons that were mentioned in the start

Nice first chapter, I enjoyed it a lot. He turned into a dragon, kind of like my people from my book haha nice work again :) I'll be back to read some more soon!

I really like that theres a page that takes time to let the reader know what type of dragons are in the book, I really do love dragons haha I can't wait to get started!

Nicely written, good work so far, and hope to see more of your story in the future. Please look at my works

Greatly written like the part of the Latin saying in there and the definition

Nicely written, suspense from the beginning to the next chapter of wondering what will happen next.

A wonderful chapter, reminds me of when I used to play capture the flag. I enjoyed the part about the rankings.

Nice chapter, good work and wonderfully written. Mysterious voice at the end, makes me wish I knew who it was and other readers will wonder as well. Marvelous work so far

Good job so far, moving forward

Nice chapter beginning

This is a very captivating piece!! It should be turned into a movie!!! (are the Hollywood directors seeing this??)

okay so i did enjoy the way this story played out but it could use a serious proofread, some of the grammar made it hard to read at some point. try reading it to your self aloud and see of you stumble through any sentences.

now with that being said, this story has alot of potential, i like the concept of a camp for people with the gift of turning into dragons. this can go many ways and have many fun adventures, id like to see where this will go.

Good job but be sure to proofread this for grammar mostly, i dont think i noticed many if any spelling errors. keep it up :) ill be looking forward to the next chapter

good information, im sure this will be useful i read on. on to chapter 1 i go :)

Lovely description of how the moon drake blasted fire, very nice. No offense, but the plot is sounding a lot like the Percy Jackson series.

He turned into a dragon, which is cool. Adam is cool. The camp is cool. Your description is cool. I rate this... cool/cool. Congrats!

Sounds veeery interesting. My favourite sounds like the Water Drake.

you should try using gemstones for the amulets like for the sun drake the amulet should be a sun stone and for the moon drake the amulet should be moon stone. It would make it sound really interesting.

Now this is going to be an interesting story. I absolutely love dragons, so I'm going to love this :) can hardly wait to read the first chapter.

Awsome book so far! For some reason it reminds me of the Wings of Fire series.