cell block screamer

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic
part of a story i have been writing about a young girl who is possessed at a Halloween party, and kills her friends.. this is the part where Marie, the young girl has been taken to an insane asylum

Submitted: March 18, 2011

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The plain white van screeched to a holt outside a large gloomy building, a large sign outside, that although was rotting away and covered in graffiti was easy to read; Vivian Hester insane asylum- hotel for peculiar people. Two men got out the front doors of the large van and simultaneously drifted towards the back of the van. The sound of metal sliding and clinking over metal told the small heap of flesh and white clothing that was writhing around on the floor of the vehicle that the doors were opening; the cut of the engine also told her that they were not driving any further. rain flooded into the van and a flash of lightening showed the Hench silhouettes of two men in light coloured scrubs as soon as the light from the lightening had gone the men grabbed the human out of the van, the young girl in the strait jacket and pink hair bow kicked and thrashed to stop the men grabbing hold of her, she was screeching and trying to bite the man who held onto her, both men deciding that if they put her on the ground she’d escape picked her up, one holding her legs and the other her torso carried her through the large iron gates and into the mental hospital as fast as they could. Entering the grey corridors the section that the girl named Marie Stracken was to be put in, although young her eagerness to escape was powerful, but not enough to get through the strict security in the VHIA her screams could be heard from down the long stretch of corridor on which other patients were placed in rooms of their own, but her sad heartbreaking pleas were useless, no one would let her out if they saw the catastrophe that she made, in that one house, only one out of the six teenagers left the next day, and sadly she was locked in a cell with maximum security as for it to never happen again.


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