Alone:What are friends for

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Poem by: Slyton Roar

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Status: Finished | Genre: Editorial and Opinion | House: Booksie Classic

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Another poem on what it feels like to be ALONE

Submitted: December 15, 2011

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Submitted: December 15, 2011

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Alone

There is no feeling like being alone,

it makes us cry,sad,mown and grown.

Its good to have someone with you,

but when you don't there is nothing you can do.

You hate that feeling of something missing,

we tell you the right things but you just aren't listening.

You get all paranoid in your thoughts,

you keep on wondering "what if you have fought",

to keep your loved one close to your heart.

You saw other people hanging out in couples,

deep down you are crying puddles.

You sat on your bed,you sat and cried,

wishing you would have someone to be by your side.

You know you have friends that will be with you in good times and bad,

they are there to make you happy not sad.

So your head clears up and you think about your friends,

you finally realize that its not the end.

Who says you need a special someone to make you complete,

when you have friends that will dance with you to the beat.

So just because you don't have that person you are alone in the world,

you have friends that are worth more than Diamonds and Pearls.

No more feeling bad,no more feeling sad,

you got people who care about you so you should be glad.

I hope this poem has inspired you

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Govet19

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Thu, December 15th, 2011 10:21am

sooo wonderful i can sense the feeling great poem

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Mon, December 26th, 2011 3:24am

Thank you soo much

Kit Wheatly

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Mon, December 19th, 2011 6:20am

Love it. I feel like this alot cause my best guy pal lives 26 miles away and i can't drive. yet. :) Good job

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Mon, December 26th, 2011 3:23am

Thanks

John Xu

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Tue, December 27th, 2011 4:09pm

It rhymes perfectly. The content was like a roller coaster. Good job, you can write real good poems. I've published my work and I hope that you can check it out and leave your comments. Thanks

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Sat, December 31st, 2011 12:50pm

Thanks and i will

blackstar07

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Tue, January 24th, 2012 7:34pm

my friends leave me alone but the only true friend left and never leave me alone .. :DD .. .. very great poem .. my friend keep it up :)

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Wed, January 25th, 2012 11:44am

thanks alot...my friend:)

bobthebuilder

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Tue, January 24th, 2012 8:52pm

Friends make the world go round. Great sentiments, great poem!

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Wed, January 25th, 2012 11:42am

thanks and you right! they do make the world go round

ashi17

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Wed, January 25th, 2012 3:28am

Amazing expression of loneliness perfectly expressed.
I REMEMBER 'At the innermost core of all loneliness is a deep and powerful yearning for union with one's lost self.
Brendan Francis'
GOOD WORK, KEEP WRITTING :)

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Wed, January 25th, 2012 11:41am

thanks for the good comments

TwoStepz

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Fri, January 27th, 2012 6:13am

Friends are everything at times; they teach you about how the world works and some teach you how fun life can be. Being alone is not a great feeling, and you showed that :)
TwoStepz!x

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Tue, January 31st, 2012 11:43am

thanks friend