The Blessed One

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: True Confessions  |  House: Booksie Classic

We are so lucky that we are blessed that we have eye sights. So let's use it for the right purposes.

Some are wishing to have it. So let's be thankful to God that He had given us eyes to see the wonders of the world.

The Blessed One

 

 

Be thankful, you are lucky;

Flying like a bird, so free

Be grateful, you are blessed;

Unlike me, my life is so messed.

 

 

In the world of dark light,

It is questionable for what’s left to right

Everywhere is a lonely sight;

Even a brave spirit can’t fight.

 

 

Inside the box of darkness,

My eyes are seeking for brightness.

You have a sight, be happy; you’re really the lucky one

How I wish I could also see, then I’ll be the blessed one.

 

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Submitted: December 23, 2011

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candyangel

utterly amazing! Honest! i love it im gonna have to read some of your other poems now really there perfect and not forced at all!

Sat, December 24th, 2011 4:25am

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really? hehehe.. thanks! xD

Fri, December 23rd, 2011 9:15pm

Jingle Q

Wow! This is a great poem! :P A bit dark for me, perhaps, but great!!! Christmassy?

Sat, December 24th, 2011 9:33am

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hehe, thanks, thanks xD

Sat, December 24th, 2011 2:30am

mpspenguin

Great poem! I can't write poetry, it always sounds tacky XD

Sat, December 24th, 2011 11:24am

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thanks for reading, friend! :)
i feel the same, too when i was just beginning to write my first poem..xD

Sat, December 24th, 2011 3:50am

A7XRica

Aw, great poem. I have to agree, a bit dark, but it's very well written :)

Sat, December 24th, 2011 12:57pm

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hehe..thanks..
i agree, too. it's really dark..b'coz the girl in the poem is blind xD

Sat, December 24th, 2011 4:10pm

Blackdragon99

Mate this is amazing. I love how each verse has a different rule! MERRY CHRISTMAS

Sat, December 24th, 2011 3:51pm

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hehe, thanks mate! xD
Merry Christmas

Sat, December 24th, 2011 4:08pm

matty6666

Really good man !

Sat, December 24th, 2011 4:10pm

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thanks friend! :)

Sat, December 24th, 2011 4:07pm

Artemis Nightshade

This is really good for one of ur first few starting poems kmu plz

Sat, December 24th, 2011 7:51pm

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thanks friend! :)
sure thing ^^

Sat, December 24th, 2011 3:51pm

Alisindra

alright, I do not see why you say you aren't very good at this. I really liked this poem. It was moving without being over done. It had a heart to it, I enjoyed reading it.

Sat, December 24th, 2011 9:13pm

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thanks..im really glad you enjoyed reading this.. :)

Sat, December 24th, 2011 3:43pm

MysteryGirl15

this is really good. you have a talent at writing poetry. keep it up :)

Sat, December 24th, 2011 9:48pm

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thanks for reading friend :)

Sat, December 24th, 2011 3:38pm

Megstar1563

This is AWESOME! Each verse had a diff fix and it made it sooooo.. AWESOME LOL.
Keep writing mate ;)

Sun, December 25th, 2011 4:25am

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thanks mate for reading! :)
yeah sure^^

Sun, December 25th, 2011 2:00am

bobthebuilder

Sad, but good. Unique point of view. Hard to imagine how different your life would be if you couldn't see.

Sun, December 25th, 2011 8:59pm

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oh yeah..even i can't imagine how hard and sad it is..

Sun, December 25th, 2011 5:11pm

blackstar07

very like this poem XD that person is blind right?

Mon, December 26th, 2011 9:56am

Author
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oh yeah! thanks..im glad you like it ^^

Mon, December 26th, 2011 4:22pm

desjane1

I enjoyed this, can relate quite easily.

Sun, January 1st, 2012 2:41am

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thanks..glad you enjoyed reading^^

Sat, December 31st, 2011 7:11pm

Matthew Brazwell

Great poem. Makes me feel a bit depressed and sad for those who are not blessed with eyesight. :(
Well keep me updated. :D

Tue, January 3rd, 2012 2:44am

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thanks^^
this is a tribute for those who are blind..and i want everyone to realize how lucky we are, having those eyes that can see..xD

Mon, January 2nd, 2012 6:47pm

Briiee

This is really good!I thought you said you were bad at poetry!!

Thu, January 5th, 2012 12:00am

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really? hehe..i dont know what to say but, that's true.. i always suck in poetry^^

Thu, January 5th, 2012 2:14am

Kyoko96

I love this poem, its kind of dark but very touching. :)

Tue, January 10th, 2012 1:19am

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oh, thanks so much friend! :))

Mon, January 9th, 2012 5:21pm

runewolf

my gosh kid you have sooo much potential!!! your peoms are allll so amazing! never EVER stop writing!

Sat, February 25th, 2012 3:18am

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love your comment :)
yep..will not stop writing..many told me not to stop writing and you're one of them who inspires me more to write^^

Fri, February 24th, 2012 9:55pm

animefreak77L

gosh this is great. its unbelievable how professionalism you are. i love that you write dark stuff and please don't go into the bright side lol.

Sun, April 15th, 2012 2:17pm

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lol.. bright side, eh? actually, i have written some stuffs like that. :p
and thanks so much friend! :))

Mon, April 16th, 2012 4:07am

PurpleDream19

So touching and sad! I can feel the emotion and the longing in this poem. Wonderfully written, it flows beautifully and sounds so unforced and perfect! You're really talented - beautiful poem :)

Sat, April 28th, 2012 10:50am

Author
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oh, thanks so much friend! :) your comment means a lot :)

Sat, April 28th, 2012 5:42am

Madhuri

You write from your heart! Beautiful poem...

Mon, May 14th, 2012 5:35pm

Author
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lol.. thanks so much. yeah, it's from my heart

Tue, May 15th, 2012 5:03pm

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