My House of Dreams

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Consult not your fears but your hopes and your dreams. Think not about your frustrations, but about your unfulfilled potential. Concern yourself not with what you tried and failed in, but with what it is still possible for you to do.

This blood of mine, keeps flowing like a stream,
You cannot stop me, even I have a dream.
Even I am a human born with a passion,
Be it in the field of academics, sports, dance or fashion!
 
The house of dreams that I built,
They shattered it all! And somehow filled me with guilt.
With their merciless questions that hit me like a dart,
My own family stopped me from following my heart!
 
I remained silent for so long,
Was innocent, but kept enduring all along.
But no more will I bear the pain,
I will follow my dream- be it sunshine or rain!
 
All the problems I face in my path- I will resolve,
Now only around my dream- will my world revolve.
Now there will be no tears or fear,
With each passing day, to my target, I will get a step near!
 
Oh my dear ones!
I wish you would have understood me for once.
Because I am a chapter of your dreams,
I know that you love me deep inside, though, you hate me- to others it seems!
 
But I know that one day you will understand though,
I do not know when and how.
But for now, as you see,
You are coming in between my dreams and me!
 
Apart from me, now no one will decide my future,
I am now going to walk on the path of success, away from torture.
On my way, you better not even try to flop me,
Because now no one can stop me from who I want to be!


Submitted: March 28, 2015

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YoungButExperienced

This is a wonderful poem about the realization that no one should stop you when it comes to following your dreams, not even your family. Beautiful.

Sat, March 28th, 2015 6:48pm

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Thanx a lot!!! I'm glad you liked the poem... Your appreciation means a lot to me... Do read the other poems written by me and let me know what you feel about them... :)

Sat, March 28th, 2015 12:10pm

natalayaevans

That was an awesome motivational peice of poetry. The flow is good and the rhyming scheme too :)
I find it very relatable. It definitely connecta with the reader. Not always are our dreams fulfilled but you needa fight to get them come true. Your poem captures this beautifully. Great job, keep writing :)

Sun, March 29th, 2015 5:21pm

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Thank you sooo much natalaya for your appreciation... And yes, I will surely keep writing! :)

Mon, March 30th, 2015 7:05am

TheHorizonBetweenUs

This was one hell of an amazing poem. The flow of the poem was smooth and I really loved this one. Very motivational and enthusiastic. Dreams are the most important part of our life and us and only us have to work to fulfil them. Loved this poem. Keep writing, love.

Mon, March 30th, 2015 5:10pm

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Thank you sooo much... And yes, I surely will keep writing! :)

Mon, March 30th, 2015 10:45am

SuzonneH

This is very good!

Mon, March 30th, 2015 6:27pm

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Thank you... :)

Mon, March 30th, 2015 12:26pm

SaraEloyce

I love this poem! it's well written. Good job!

Tue, March 31st, 2015 5:05am

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Thanx again!

Tue, March 31st, 2015 8:41am

B Douglas Slack

A very motivational poem, Smiley. ~Tom

Thu, April 2nd, 2015 1:52pm

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Thanx a lot!

Thu, April 2nd, 2015 8:15am

Fail Monkey

Beautifully written. I believe I read on your profile that you`re 13 years old? I have to say, I wouldn`t have expected that. Reading your work, you seem very mature. I was very impressed by this poem. I find it incredibly motivational and I love the deep symbolism and imagery you portray here. Very well done. I`m going to go check out your poems `My First Day of Class Eight`(love the title, by the way) and `For My BFF` right now. I`ll let you know what I think! If they`re anything like this one, I know I`ll be impressed. Enjoy your weekend!! - Kate xo

Fri, April 3rd, 2015 4:29pm

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Oh, thank you so much for tons of appreciation! :)

Fri, April 3rd, 2015 11:31am

Becca Swan

This is amazing... I am young and trying to follow a dream but my family doesn't exactly agree with me and this poem just touched me so much and I want to thank you :)

Sat, April 25th, 2015 8:21pm

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Thank you sooo much for your appreciation dear... There will be many many many obstacles in your path of success but what is important is that you do not get demotivated and keep trying! I'm glad you liked it!

Thu, April 30th, 2015 7:19am

FunWriting

Awesome poem :) you really know how to use your words, it really motivates the reader, shown by these other comments :D enjoyed it!! :) FW~

Wed, December 30th, 2015 4:55pm

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Thank you so much... really means a lot to me! :)

Wed, December 30th, 2015 9:31am

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