Too long?Too short?,Too short? Just perfect?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

She tries to make him her own friend.He tries to make her his own something special...

I gave my poem to him and he started to read:

I live in my own world

I'm the kinda girl

You will hate

I'm the one you'll think is great

My life is super ficial

My love is never official

I ain't bright

I'm never right

People hate me

I'm not a wannabe

I don't accept their invitations

I hate their interruptions

They suspect I'm a witch

But they are the ones who are rich

They hate my guts

I hate their "ands" and "buts"

They hate my tough tone

I hate their slimy bones

Back to you

Did I tell my words are always true?

I lie all the time

I'm bad at rhymes

I'm selfish

I have no wish

I'm my own happiness

Instead of pretty, I'd rather be a mess

I love all deep cuts

They don't drive me nuts


Yeah, and next you're gonna fly!

I love my sarcastic talk

But what's with the way you walk?

I don't have my web link

You don't go out and drink

There's lots of differences between us

I don't know how we trust

Each other

Maybe it's for one another

You are the one on I depend

So...wanna be friends?

I got worried.What if he said no?He looked at me.

He asked me,'Isn't this too long to ask to be friends?'

I frowned and started walking away.

He stopped me and smiled,'And too short for a life time friendship?'

My frown turned upside down.We hugged each other.

Ten years from then, here we are again.He gave me an envelope.I read it:

We've been friends for so long...

I dunno if it's wrong

For us to be

More than friends

Will you marry me?

I gasped,'Isn't it too short to ask for marriage?'

He gave me his "Seriously you're playing off with this?" look.

I laughed,'And just perfect for life time marriage!'

I hugged him and we both shared our first kiss.Two months after, we married and lived our happy ending....<3

Submitted: October 01, 2010

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Crazi gal

dat waz quick but just right 4 me good job :)

Sat, October 2nd, 2010 6:33am



Tue, October 5th, 2010 12:29am

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