He's no longer in my heart....

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
I don't think I got this one right.... It doesn't feel right to me. I don't think I like the last line but if you read this go ahead and leave comments if you have a better line:)

Submitted: February 19, 2010

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I scream

But no is there to hear.

I shiver

But I know there is nothing to fear

I cry

and agonize about how I got here

I breathe

Confused and surprised about my sudden cheer

I smile

because I remember him here

Then my heart breaks

because I no longer feel his presence near....


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