Llegaste Tu

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
A story about a girl which comes from an unstable, violent relationship meets someone completely oppostie. Will they last or will they allow the people around them destroy what they have?

Submitted: June 28, 2012

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Chapter One

“Pilot”

Adelina: “In many stories it starts from the very beginning, like when the princess firsts meets the prince, or when the well accomplished lawyer meets the a salesman, all happy, all except mine. Mine starts where everybody else ends, mine starts in my “supposedly” happy ending. When I first met him I thought it was my true love but as time went by I started to figure out what kind of guy he really is. First it was “love” but then it became a nightmare. “

(In her mom’s apartment)

Jesse:” Esta comida esta muy rica, por que tu hija no puede asar esto como tu Gloria?
Mrs. Gloria Lopez: “ No se, yo quiera sener esta recista a ella por ya sabes que ella no pueda asar nada, igual como su padre.”
Adelina:” No hables asi de mi padre, el erra mucho mas major que tu.”
Mrs. Lopez:” Tu lo dijestas, erra.”
Adelina:” Tovia es, el es alguen muy importante, no como to que nomas eres una perra.”
Jesse:” DON’T TALK TO YOUR MOM LIKE THAT!!!!”
Adelina:” I can talk to her in any way I want, she’s my mom, she never ever cared for me, so why should you.”
Mrs. Lopez:” Gracias por proteger me, Jesse, tu me quieres no como mi pureba hija.” Adelina:” Tu y el se acustaron, estaban juntos, COMO ME PUDRES ASAR ESTO ERES MI MADRE.”
Mrs. Lopez:” Y QUE, TU NO TE ESTABAS APPORVECHANDO, YO SI, Y EL ES EXCELLENTE EN LA CAMA.”
Adelina:” ERES UNA PERRA, UNA MALIDITA PERRA.”

(Jesse gets up and punches Adelina in the face)

Jesse:” You WILL NEVER DISRESPECT YOUR MOTHER THAT WAY AGAIN YOU HEARD ME. EVER.”

( Jesse starts hitting Adelina harder and harder each time, until she completely becomes unconscious)

(Commercial Break)

(The Next Morning)

(Adelina is still on the ground, when she wakes up)

(She gets up slowly because her head hurts, she grabs he stuff and leaves before her mom and Jesse wakes up)

(At school that day)

(Walking into her first class, walking to her friend’s desk)

Olivia:” Oh my god, what happened to you?” Adelina:” I’ll tell you later, I just want to forget right now.” Olivia:” Well to change the subject, have you decided to go to the dance?” Adelina:” ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND, Jesse will kill me if I go.” Olivia:” Jesse doesn’t have to know, and why are you still with him, leave his ass already, you deserve much better you know.” Adelina:” I wish I could but as you know, I’m engaged to him. I can’t leave him even thought I want to so bad.” Olivia:” I don’t understand you, you say that you hate Jesse, even thought you are engaged to him. If you don’t love him then don’t marry him.” Adelina:” You don’t understand anything, all my life I was in danger and I owe my safety to him. Plus he protects me from everyone.” Olivia:” I will never understand you ever.”

(The teacher came in and the class started)

(Afterschool that day)

(Adelina is walking home because Jesse forgot to pick her up)

(She is singing to her favorite song, “Llegaste Tu”)

Adelina:" Hundida yo estaba
Ahogada en soledad
Mi corazon lloraba de en vacio total
Todo lo intente
Por donde quiera
Te busque
Eras tu mi necesidad"

(All of the sudden, Jesse comes behind Adelina and scares her)

(Commercial Break)

Jesse:” WHAT ARE YOU DOING? How much times I have to tell you to STOP singing, you can’t sing. Get inside and get to work before I get mad. Adelina:”Why don’t you let me express myself, because of you I had to turn down the best opportunity I could ever get, I was at the very top and now because of you, I have to live in this hell. “ Jesse:” DON’T TALK TO ME LIKE THAT, CAUSE OF ME, YOU AREN’T DIED.”
Adelina:” I’LL RATHER BE DIED THAN TO LIVE WITH YOU.”
Jesse:” You BITCH!!!!”

( Jesse slaps Adelina in front of the neighbors)

(He grabs her and walk to the house)

(When they enter he pushes her to the ground and kick her, she starts crying, while her mom is watching)

(After so much hits, Adelina passes out)

(When she wakes up, she finds herself covered with blood, she grabs her phone to call Olivia)

Adelina:” O.liv..ia…can you come get me please…I’m covered in blood.. I’m…in…so…much..pain.” Olivia:” Where are you at?” Adelina:” I’m at my mother’s house. Jesse and my mom are here thought” Olivia:” I don’t care, I’m on my way.”

(Commercial Break)

(Five minutes later, the doorbell rings. Adelina’s mom answers the door)

Mrs. Lopez:” How may I help you?”
Olivia:” I’m here to get Adelina.”
Mrs. Lopez:” Umm…she’s not here right now.”
Olivia:” Oh please, I know she’s here, and I know that Jesse hits her too. Who do you think called me, to come here.”
Mrs. Lopez:” If I were you I would leave now.”
Olivia:” How could you let Jesse hit her, she’s your daughter. Adelina told me everything, you should have never been a mother.”
Mrs. Lopez:” HOW DARE YOU TELL ME I’M A UNFIT MOTHER, I’m a great mother to Adelina, a great one.”
Olivia:” Oh please, Adelina told me about you and Jesse. Jesse is your daughter’s fiancé.”
Mrs. Lopez:” THAT’S NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!”
Olivia:” WHERE IS SHE?”

(Mrs.Lopez stepped back and Olivia saw Adelina on the floor)

(She ran to get her, when Olivia was able to have Adelina stand up, Jesse and Mrs. Lopez were there)

Mrs. Lopez:” Please honey, stay with us.” Jesse:” If you leave that door…” Olivia:” WHAT YOU GONNA DO, KILL HER.”

(Jesse stood there silent)

(They left, on their way to the hospital, Adelina passed out)


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